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    My favorite season is coming already! I personally love autumn of the seasons. It's kind of old-fashioned but appreciates the fallen leaves is one of my favorite amusement. In this wonderful transitional season, nature shows it's magical while all the leaves change their colors, green mixed with orange, and red mixed with yellow. And if comes to a windy day, all the leaves look just like dancing together. All the colors mixed together created the harmonious view of natural beauty. Also, the temperature is perfectly comfortable while you go into the forest. It is quite a beautiful calm time of the year, which makes me feel relaxed and peaceful.
    October 10, 2018
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    Color Blue: Grammar suggest

    Color Orange:  Sounds more nature

    Color Red: The syntax is a bit strange / Wrong word

    (xxx): Make messages more clear

    (=): You can also express this way


    为什么我喜欢一个人旅行?

    我喜欢(的事情是)一个人旅行。为什么喜欢一个人旅行呢?是因为我会想去哪里就哪里,想什么时候去就什么时候去。我可以自己考虑我的旅行的计划。

    我不用顾虑别人的情况还有(别人的)意见。
    所以我喜欢一个人去旅行。
    还有其他理由。自己一个人去旅行让我变得勇敢和增长我的精神。(=独自旅行让我变得勇敢同时也增长我的历练)
    如果我在别的国家发现什么问题,我一定要用它们的语言自己解决问题(=独自解决问题)。我不可以(=不能)依靠我认识的人。

    我觉得这样的紧张的经验会让我成长。
    还有其他理由。我可以交新的朋友。一个人去旅行是孤独的。但是,这(个事情)是很大的机会。

    我每次住在宿舍,那里有很多来自不同世界中的人。他们也是孤独的。交换彼此的情报比任何旅行的书本更有益。

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    October 10, 2018
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