A letter for a school.
Dear principal
I am writing to enquire about enrolling my children in your school. We have just moved to this town last week where (zone of North primary school)<em>this part is unclear what you are trying to say.</em> My nine year old daughter and seven year old son have just come from Japan a couple of months ago so they might need to learn English at EAL before joining a class.
Also they are not used to be living this country and they may to need more help.
Could you arrange a school tour and explain what can I do, please?
Regardless
Tomo