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Thank you for your quick response. I've attached the image of the full photo spread of the passport as you requested.
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Thank you for your time. the time to do so.

Very close. "I'm at school" - This is an answer to "where are you?" or "What are you doing now?". It implies you are a student there. Similar to saying "I'm at work". If you aren't a student there, you would probably say "I'm at the school" (similar to "I'm at the bank). In both cases, you could be inside or outside. "I'm in school" - You're enrolled in school and taking classes. You could still have a job. If you are ONLY in school and have no job, you would usually say "I'm in school full-time". "I'm in the school" - You're in the school building. You don't need to be a student, you could be visiting a school and say this

She will hand over the job to you. Therefore, you will take over her job. The difference is in who is doing the action.

My husband and I went to Okayama prefecture by local train from December 22nd to December 23rd

My husband and I went to Okayama prefecture by local train from December 22nd to December 23rd. We woke up at 5:00. We left home at 6 o’clock in the morning. Our train was delayed because of train signal failure. So we arrived at Okayama at almost 2 o’clock in the afternoon. It took 8 hours by local train. I was very exhausted. At first we went to Kojima Jeans Street to look for a nice jean jacket. He found a simple navy long jacket in a blue jeans shop. It really suits him. We decided to buy them for us as a Christmas gift to each other. I was really glad. Next we had a lunch in a sushi restaurant. Local fresh fish were very tasty. We left Okayama at 5 o’clock in the evening and checked in the into the hotel in Yamaguchi prefecture at 11 o’clock at night. We stayed at train for 14. Hours. We were on the train for 14 hours. Sight-seeing was only for a few hours. It was a tiring day.

(When you write times, it is probably most natural here to say 5am, 6am, 2pm etc. But, your writing is correct as well. 

"Broaden your mind" or "Broaden your horizons" are common idioms. "broadened mind" and "broad mind" are grammatically correct, but don't sound very natural and aren't used very often. It's more natural to say "open mind". "He reads often, so he has developed an open mind" "It's important to learn about other cultures to open your mind"

Coffee

・My coffee is still half full.　（まだ半分ある）
・My coffee is still more than half full.　（まだ半分以上ある）
・My coffee is only half full.　（半分しかない）
・My coffee is already empty.　（もう空だ）
・My coffee will be out of stock.　（なくなりそう）店でコーヒーが売り切れです　this only makes sense when buying coffee (or selling it)

My New Vocabulary for Today : Part 90

Hi, I'm trying to make some sentences using the new vocabulary I learnt today.
If there are any grammar mistakes and/or weird word choices, please correct them. Thanks.

1) I am really fascinating about the frontier of the physiology. I am really fascinated about the frontier of psychology.(The frontier of psychology is fascinating)

2) I argue that the world is changing at a breathtaking pace.

3) This scissors are for both right handedness parson and left handedness one. THESE scissors are for both right-handed persons and left-handed ones. 

4) Which is your handedness, right or left? Normally we say "Are you left or right handed?" - but your sentence is ok. 

5) I'll survive with only a rudimentary grasp of English at abroad.

6) I learnt about windmills from a tattered book.

7) The windmill he made was rickety and swayed in strong gales.

8) The crude machine was replaced with a sturdier one. 

9) His accomplishment made him a instant world fame. His accomplishment made him instantly world famous.

10) A boy who is in (going through)puberty is unwilling to study.

11) I would like to pay in a lump please? instead of installment. I would like to pay in a lump sum, please, instead of installments.

12)Until you fill in the mandatory sections in red, you won't go to the next stage.

Second Party

For now, I made a reservation for the our after party for us since at the end of the year most of drinking places will be packed soon early. If you something’s come up, please let me know, I’ll cancel it:) この

(The beginning "for the after party for us" is OK grammatically, but sounds more natural with "for our after party")

Good job :)