I think, because your sentence is a slogan, it works. You have made the slogan about the reader, whereas the original sentence was about XXXX. However, Gary is right - the first (original) sentence is not natural.
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I'm not sure if "litmus test" is used correctly here. The answer to a litmus test is a simple "yes" or "no".
For example, a litmus test for hiring a dog-sitter might be "Does he/she have dog-sitting experience?".
Can you explain more what your sentence is about?
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Breaking it down:
1. There were many good performances.
2. Hala had the best performance.
3. Hala played a woman who was compassionate BUT ALSO very defiant.
Does that help?
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Hello! I can't give you the "correct" answers but I can give you some insight: a natural English speaker probably would not say any of these four sentences. I agree with DanN completely.
For #1, I would say "I was on the street where he lives, but I didn't know which house was his."
For #2, I would say "I don't know the way to church."