Please, help me correct this. I have not much time Here I provide you with all sources of his funds. The first document is the funding letter from Concordia University. In sum, it provides him around $27,730 per year. On page 7, I put his personal Bank Statement . He cannot assign all of them to his studies because he wants to leave his work next month, and he will live on it for a while. Also, he has to deal with all next expenses using this budget. So, the amount he can spend on his studies is around $25,000. His brothers’ bank statements are on next pages. Based on his needs, they assigned around $30,000 to his studies; if necessary, he can ask them for more money. My tuition and life expenses in Canada will be around $26,000 every year. Therefore he can afford it for the first year even if things do not go as it is planned and he does not receive the university funds on time. ***This is an explanation on some documents provided for an ambassy

I need this to be coherent, natural and professional. Thanks In a pursuit to create a comfortable life for myself, I sent my resume to some universities close to my parental village and a university in Basht offered me a position to work as a math professor over there, after graduating from Concordia university. Degrees from Canadian universities are greatly valued in Iran, so following my passion to work as a math professor in towns such as Basht would give me the best possible quality of life.

I need this to sound natural and professional. Thanks ... Also, to me, growing up in a big family was not just about being surrounded by enormous love and support, but it was also about making my best lifelong friends. I let my siblings in on any of my little secrets because I knew they would keep loving me in any circumstances. They are like my best friends and I want to live my life close to them.

Please let me know of some synonyms of the word " Sophisticated" in the following term Sophisticated mathematicians

This is supposed to be a formal text. I very much like to see how native speakers express the ideas. His love of family and his passion for math have determined his life choices. For his entire life, he has lived with or near his large family of eleven siblings and parents. The warm and supportive atmosphere of the family have caused his siblings do not live far from his parental village, where his parents currently live. he has worked as a math teacher for years in Basht, a town around twenty kilometers from the village, even though, with his Master’s degree, teaching in a big city is much more lucrative. Degrees from Canadian Universities are highly credible in Iran. So following his passion to work as a math professor in towns such as Basht would give him the best possible quality of life; he already has a job offer from a University in Basht. Furthermore, his father is already 68 and his mother is 62. He would definitely return to Iran after graduating from Concordia University to spend more time with them because they will not be around forever. Finally, in order to have a comfortable life, he has built a large lemon garden in his parental village. The garden will be profitable soon and will provide him with a peaceful place to focus on his scientific works in the future.

I so much want to know how native speakers express the following meanings. His love of family and his passion for math have determined his life choices. For his entire life, he has been living with his big family of eleven siblings and parents. There are close bonds among them. His parents live in a small village. The siblings do not live far from there because they do not want to miss the warm family atmosphere. They live and work in either the village or towns close to the village. A town named Basht is around 20 kilometers away from the village. He has been working over there as a math teacher for years. Although, with a master degree, working in big cities is much more lucrative.