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- Making-sentence practices 1.Retention The retention of energy is very important for athletes in a marathon. The images are helpful to the retention of information. 2.Egalitarian Many famous historical celebrities pursue an egalitarian society. 3.Horde There are hordes of tourists on this beautiful beach in the summer holiday. 4.Artery You need to do some emergency treatment of wounds if you cut your artery accidentally. 5.Grift Grift make people become evil and crafty. 6.Jostle Peoples jostled each other for buying in 'The Black Friday'. 7. Casualty The casualty in this major accident has arisen to 300 peoples. 8.Apropos President made a presentation apropos of the trade war. 9.peculiar when he back to his house, he found a peculiar smell and realized that the gas was leaking. 10.Irreversible the injury of meniscus is irreversible, so people should protect their knees during playing basketball.September 10, 201820
- Sentence-making practices 1. abstain Patients must abstain from smoking for the health issue. Three men have abstained in the vote. 2. abuzz The anecdotes of mayor make people abuzz. 3. acidity The vinegar is acidity material. 4.acne Young people often suffer from acne during 12~24. 5.act upon After listening to my advice, he decides to act upon my words. 6.acupucture Acupuncture is one of the Chinese ancient medical therapy. 7.food additive The sinister businessman uses food additive instead of the real fruit in juice. 8.aerosol The plane company forbids passengers from taking the aerosol can into the plane. 9. aerosolize In a magic show, magicians usually aerosolized dry ice to create a mysterious atmosphere. 10.affiliate the knight was not affiliated with this brutal king. The UK affiliated with EU in 1973. Thank you for your correcting, and you can build another sentence if my sentence is inappropriate. I will really appreciate it.September 2, 201820
- A Suggestion letter to local newspaper about “White Pollution” Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this letter to raise some suggestion for the white pollution. As we all know , the government came about a policy that getting plastics bags from supper market was need to pay instead of free in few years ago, nevertheless, it didn’t seem to work successfully, the white pollution problem is still a serious problem. There are ,indeed, much room for settling this problem. Firstly, i think the super market can sell the cloth bag or carton box in checkout counter instead only offering the plastic bag. It will make customers have more optional. Secondly ,raising the price of plastic bag, the price is too low to make people care about it ,that’s why the policy charging plastic bag didn’t work well. Last but not least , it is matter to teach people the importance of protecting environment from whit pollution thought school education,public service advertising. I think it would be beneficial if you can accept my suggestion offed above and publish it in the newspaper .July 31, 201820
我刚才复习一些词汇，我发现每天复习词汇是很有利
我刚才复习一些词汇，我发现每天复习词汇是(对学习中文）很有利（的），特别是学习常用的词汇，可是我也注意到我不可以一次学习太多了，否则我无法记住它们。昨天我尝试用中文表达复杂的想法，即使很难，但是我仍然尽我所能，其实我很喜欢用中文表达复杂的想法，因为这样让我知道更多怎么表达我自己。虽然今天我的工作很忙，但是我仍然可以完成很多的事情，所以我很喜欢（喜欢什么？），其实过去两周我的老板有假期（在休假），今天他回来了，所以我们所有同事都跟他聊天。Green font: Remark
Blue font: GOOD SENTENCE !!!
Yellow font: wrong words
Well written, Have a good day ~
0 votedJuly 20, 20181谢谢同学们和朋友们
同学们和住在中国的朋友（们），感谢你们给我的记忆而且(和）你们对我的善良。住在中国有时候（生活）很难（艰难），有时候也很孤单。感谢（你们）跟我（一起）创造了美好（的）回忆。虽然我有（经历了）很多的挑战但是我永远不会忘记过去两年的朋友和经理（经历）。你们都又努力又聪明。这里的气氛和美国完全不同哈哈。我知道你们都会去美国或者其他地方特别好的大学。当我来到中国的时候，我很害怕，也很害羞。我被新环境吓到了，害怕我不会被欢迎或接受了（了 表示完成时）。我就想让你们知道我很想要跟你们融入（融入你们的集体中），而且所以跟你们说中文。我现在希望我以前多了和你们中的一些人接触（抱歉，不太了解你想表达的准确意思）。我也希望我能明年看到你们毕业。
如果你们愿意，我也希望你们能和我保持联系, 已经毕业的同学们也可以 。即使我们不常常说话或者过去没有，请随时跟我联系，因为我确珍惜你们所有人。我很难过我不能跟你们完成ib课程而且不能在（学校名字）跟你们毕业。我就感觉我明年在瑞士需要（将要）走（上）一个不同的路线（道路）（这里用将来时态会比较合适）。我还打算回北京上（大学名字），我希望再次见到你们。抱歉，这是又长又一个（伤感的）（缺少了一个形容词）月晚，（虽然）我就特别忙（着）上课但是我就（是想）让你们都知道这些记忆有多重要，我非常感谢你们。
过去的两年对我来说意义重大，即使明年我不在北京，我也会为你们欢呼。谢谢大家，加油！GREEN FONT: The remark to tell you why this is wrong
YELLOW FONT: Wrong words and incorrect grammar
Good writing ! Have a good day !0 votedJuly 20, 20181黄西的故事
今天我上中文课的时候，我们聊天的主题相当有意思。我们看了一个视频关于一个单口相声叫黄西。（我们看了一个关于单口相声的视频，叫黄西。）他是中国人说英语的相声演员（他是一个说英语的中国相声演员）。原来他的专长是生物和化学，而且他是他的高中学校的第一名。然后呢，他上了一个科学大学（研究型大学）以后（后来）他在一个基因制药公司工作。虽然他工作的方面挺好的但是他还不满意。他想要追求他的爱好，说笑话。他决定上夜校学习笑话和幽默，以后（后来）他九年奋斗了（奋斗了九年）最后找到了表演的机会。他面对了很多的坎坷，因为他说笑话的俱乐部不给他钱还有如果他想在这些俱乐部表演然后他至少需要找两个人才能表演。他还有语言的问题就是很多的人听不懂他的笑话因为他的口音很浓。他终于去白宫表演，蓦然（突然）变了（得）很有名。
我支持他，因为他实现了他的梦想即使他九年奋斗了。我觉得大部分的时间，只要我们很努力的追求我们的目标，奋斗可以导致成功。我们应该用我们年富力强的时间(在我们年富力强的时候）做我们的爱好·，找我们生活的目标和心愿不然我们的心里总是会不满意。我们需要欢迎生活的惊喜，借鉴（认识）自己的错误。我们都未必有很多的钱，但是只要我们开心那就好。
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专长
坎坷
导致
年富力强：在年富力强的时候，好好学习。
心愿
借鉴：中国曾经借鉴了苏联的发展模式。 借鉴 means learn to OTHER people or country, you can't use it to express learning to yourself.
未必
蓦然: 回头慕然发现，我走过的沙滩留下了一个个深深的脚印。 this word actually not a common word, people often use it in poem or lyric prose.Good writing , you can ask if you have any question.
0 votedJuly 6, 20181
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