I would be most grateful if you would let me know the errors with the following part of my SOP

I have been asked many times, "What is the benefit of studying pure math?" My answer would be plain and simple: for creativity and inspiration! Creativity is the key to paradise! As I went along studying math, I found out that dividing math into different topics is necessary for understanding it in-depth. However, all the barriers between mathematical topics are imaginary. For example, Functional Analysis results from the interplay between Algebra and Topology. In actuality, mathematicians are able to contribute to all scientific fields because they have trained their mind powers the most. Numerous mathematician working with physicists, biologists, chemists, geologists or working for NASA, Google Company, and even at the CIA support my claim.