A few random sentences [1]

Hi, if you find any mistake, or if one my sentences sounds unnatural, please suggest something to me! I'd be very grateful.

Scoring chance - They've created twice as many scoring chances as their rivals and yet, they are still behind on the scoreboard.

Take out - The left pocket of my trousers ripped when I was trying to take my pen out and it snagged on it.

Become embroiled - The traders' council members have become embroiled in an argument over whether the free entry of sea merchant vessels should be allowed. Some have even gone so far as to suggest that they shouldn't be let in by any means. It's undeniable that winds of war have been blowing all over the region.

Give in - She insisted on her parents enrolling her in the course so much that they gave in at last.

He insisted so much on coming with them that they ended up giving in.

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The cat broke one of the vases that her owner brought in from China, and the prettiest one at that.