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- You Can Write Believe it or not, you can write. You don't have to be a writer. And you don't have to be very good at writing. You can enjoy writing even as a very beginner. Just don't expect too much from your writing and you will probably be surprised with the result. There are a lot of things that you can write about. You can write about what you care about, what others care about, or the things that touched your heart, the things that impressed you. If something impressed you, there must be a reason for that. Chances are that it will be meaningful to others as well. Not everyone will like your writing, but I can assure you that your stories will resonate with someone somewhere. Before you write, you don't have to get everything planned out. Writing is a creative process, which is pretty much like drawing. When you get to a certain point, your feel will tell you where to go next. On the other hand, if you are intend to tell a specific story. You need to have faith in yourself, believe that you can tell the story well enough with your current language ability. This will allow your potential to emerge. When you are writing, remember to keep it simple. Most of us tend to convey too much too soon and end up making things too complicated. It's not good for both the writer and the readers. And don't worry about making any mistakes. Leave it to your revising and editing process. Always focus on the present moment, and keep a smooth flow of your sentences. Writing is an art form, which is not about being right or wrong, but about being authentic and creative. It's a time to be free. You are the boss! You can write about everything and anything as long as you keep your audience in mind. Imagine you are talking to them face to face, and you will be able to adjust your tone accordingly. Now, pick up your pen and start writing. Let your pen dance on the paper, and your inner voice be heard by the world!
September 21, 201700 Lunch Break
I made Yakisoba for today's lunch. Yakisoba is a kind of Japanese fried noodle. I was supposed to have lunch at the office, but I had to go out, and I didn't want to bring it back home, so I took my lunch box with me. Later, I decided to have lunch in the park. Although winter should be over soon, it was still quite cold. And my Yakisoba was cold, too. Even worse, there were so many pigeons around me while I was eating and I worried that they might poop on me. It was a quite uncomfortable lunch break!0 votedFebruary 28, 20172My Personal Hero
My cousin is my personal hero. She is a persistent and enthusiastic person. because sShe graduated from university quickly. And after that, she started her own business with her brother. She had to work very hard at the beginning stage of their business getting her dream. When she was young, she had a hard life. Sometimes she didn´t even have enough food to eat. But now her life is so different much better. Her persevererance and the support from her family have been was the key of to her success.and obviously the support of her family. At some point, she thought to about giving give up but she didn't. I have learned lots of things a lot from her. One thing was is that I should never gove give up in the hard moments during the hard times. Thanks to her, I'm going to be more persistent and patient with my goals.0 votedFebruary 23, 20170- The Phone Rang The phone rang. The voice on the other end said "We need you again." then hang up. I recognized that voice instantly but when my wife asked me, I tried my best to stay calm and said, "Just a wrong number." After helping out with the dish washing and laundry, I read a story to our children like always. They enjoyed it pretty much. I looked at them carefully and tried to keep their images in my mind as clearly as possible. Then I kissed my wife and told her that I was heading out for a walk and I would be back soon. But I lied. I wished I could. There was a black car waiting for me outside of our apartment. I hopped in after I made sure that no one was watching. But before we got to our headquarter, the driver pulled over the car and said, "We're there." I had no choice but get off the car and went into the building wondering what was happening. As a special agent with years of practical experience, I could tell there was something wrong. I pulled out my handgun and kicked the door open. It was dark and quiet inside. Suddenly the lights turned on and people were shouting, "Happy Birthday, agent Bill!" It turned out to be a surprise Birthday party for me thrown by my colleagues and superiors. My wife and children were there, too. I put away my handgun while tears rolled down my face. My boss then told me it was my last mission and I could enjoy my life with my family afterwards. I hugged and thanked everyone. It was the best time of my life! Later we moved to a small island called Magicland. And since then, every day seemed to be a holiday to us. This morning I was enjoying my tea and suddenly the phone rang! Again! (This is my first fiction story. How would you make it sound more natural? Your feedback will be highly appreciated. )February 22, 201720
What A Great Day!
Today was a blessed day. The most happiest thing happened today was that the two hosts that I applied for to officially accepted my offers. I sent them offers about a week ago.and Both of them replied to me with positive answer, yet, it wasn't really a confirmation and they positively and asked me to write them more for more information about me. So I replied them immediately with excitement. However, they didn't answer me after five days past, after five days, I still heard nothing from them. but I didn't want to push them because I knew thought they might just be just very busy. So I waited until till today, and finally, I sent them a message, and then soon after I sent them messages, they replied me with acceptance. they sent me the confirmations. It was the best feeling ever! So now, my travel plan for the next 6 months are has been fixed. And I'm going to visit 8 countries and stay with 6 hosts.
There's another reason thing that made my day. The host I'm staying with has been away since this morning so the job was enjoyable.0 votedFebruary 22, 20171The Strawberry
My favorite fruit is the strawberry. Strawberries are harvested during winter and are acinaceous. I have a pleasant memory of picking a bunch lot of strawberries in strawberry fields when I was eight years old. I was wearing a straw cowboy hat and draping in a flimsy outer garment over my shoulders. Some of the strawberries were grown in a vinyl greenhouse to prevent which protect them from gale, cold and vermin. Those fields were humid and hot but I was enjoyable happy since I could eat the ones as much as as many strawberries as I wanted. I made strawberry jams with half of the strawberries I picked. and sugar that was half of the ones, I added some sugar in it and then put them it into a jar.
Please correct my sentences. Thanks in advance :)0 votedFebruary 21, 20172I Can Smell Spring in the Air
Spring is around the corner, so it will soon be one year since I picked up my English! For me, it’s easy to start doing something but difficult to stick to it. so I'm glad that I have made it this far with my English learning. I'm grateful for my family's support and my teacher's hard work in helping me improve my English. I hope I will be able to keep going and make it to next spring as well!
I would appreciate it if you could correct my sentences.0 votedFebruary 20, 20172- 《K歌之王》粤语版所包含歌名及歌词注音
《我》唱得不够动人你别皱眉
ngo5 coeng3 dak1 bat1 gau3 dung6 jan4 nei5 bit6 zau3 mei4
《我愿意》和《你》《约定》至死
ngo5 jyun6 ji3 wo4 nei5 joek3 ding6 zi3 sei2
我只想嬉戏《唱游到下世纪》
ngo5 zi2 soeng2 hei1 hei3 coeng3 jau4 dou3 haa6 sai3 gei2
请你别嫌我将这煽情《奉献》给你
cing2 nei5 bit6 jim4 ngo5 zoeng1 ze5/ze3 sin3 cing4 fung6 hin3 kap1 nei5还能《凭什么》
waan4 nang4 pang4 sam6 mo1
《拥抱》若未能令你兴奋
jung2 pou5 joek6 mei6 nang4 ling6 nei5 hing1 fan5
便宜地唱出 写在《情歌》的性感
pin4 ji4 dei6 coeng3 ceot1 se2 zoi6 cing4 go1 dik1 sing3 gam2
还能凭什么 要是《爱》不可感动人
waan4 nang4 pang4 sam6 mo1 jiu3 si6 oi3 bat1 ho2 gam2 dung6 jan4
俗套的歌词 煽动你恻忍
zuk6 tou3 dik1 go1 ci4 sin3 dung6 nei5 cak1 jan2谁人又《相信》一世一生这肤浅《对白》
seoi4 jan4 jau6 soeng1 seon3 jat1 sai3 jat1 sang1 ze5/ze3 fu1 cin2 deoi3 baak6
来吧送给你 叫几百万人流泪过的歌
loi4 baa6 sung3 kap1 nei5 giu3 gei2 baak3 maan6 jan4 lau4 leoi6 gwo3 dik1 go1
如从未听过《誓言》如《幸福摩天轮》
jyu4 cung4 mei6 ting1 gwo3 sai6 jin4 jyu4 hang6 fuk1 mo1 tin1 leon4
才令我因你要呼天叫地 爱爱爱爱那么多
coi4 ling6 ngo5 jan1 nei5 jiu3 fu1 tin1 giu3 dei6 oi3 oi3 oi3 oi3 naa5 mo1 do1将我漫天《心血》《一一》抛到银河
zoeng1 ngo5 maan6 tin1 sam1 hyut3 jat1 jat1 paau1 dou3 ngan4 ho4
谁是《垃圾》 谁不舍我难过
seoi4 si6 laap6 saap3 seoi4 bat1 se3 ngo5 naan4 gwo3
分一丁目赠我
fan1 jat1 ding1 muk6 zang6 ngo5我唱出心里话时 《眼泪》会流
ngo5 coeng3 ceot1 sam1 leoi5 waa6 si4 ngaan5 leoi6 wui6 lau4
要是怕难过抱住我手
jiu3 si6 paa3 naan4 gwo3 pou5 zyu6 ngo5 sau2
我只得千语万言放在你心
ngo5 zi2 dak1 cin1 jyu5 maan6 jin4 fong3 zoi6 nei5 sam1
比《渴望》《地老天荒》更《简单》未算罕有
bei2 hot3 mong6 dei6 lou5 tin1 fong1 gang1 gaan2 daan1 mei6 syun3 hon2 jau5给你用力作二十首《不舍不弃》
kap1 nei5 jung6 lik6 zok3 ji6 sap6 sau2 bat1 se3 bat1 hei3
还附送你爱得《过火》
waan4 fu6 sung3 nei5 oi3 dak1 gwo3 fo2
给你卖力唱二十首《真心真意》
kap1 nei5 maai6 lik6 coeng3 ji6 sap6 sau2 zan1 sam1 zan1 ji3
米高峰都因我动容
mai5 gou1 fung1 dou1 jan1 ngo5 dung6 jung4
无人及我 你怎么竟然说《K歌之王》 是我
mou4 jan4 kap6 ngo5 nei5 zam2 mo1 ging2 jin4 syut3 K go1 zi1 wong4 si6 ngo5我只想跟你《未来》浸在爱河
ngo5 zi2 soeng2 gan1 nei5 mei6 loi4 zam3 zoi6 oi3 ho4
而你那呵欠《绝》得不能绝
ji4 nei5 naa5 ho1 him3 zyut6 dak1 bat1 nang4 zyut6
绝到溶掉我
zyut6 dou3 jung4 diu6 ngo5注释:米高峰,Microphone(麦克风)粤语音译。
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