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a sport competition - "A sports competition"...when you are entitling the topic, pls start with Capital letters. It should mention as "<em>sports</em>" instead of sport (or) also you can entitle as "Sports Competition"
The World Cup which is hold every four years is my favorite sports event. "The FIFA <em>World Cup</em> is <em>held every four years</em>, its my favourite sports event"
The 18th World Cup was held in South Africa in 2010. --> This is correct bt still you can make it better.
You shouldnt put so many "in" in the sentence. Instead, you write like this..."2010 world cup was held in SouthAfrica". This looks so simple.
I saw the game everyday even it was at 1 o’clock.--> This is wrong.
"I saw all the matches' (or) games everyday even <em>if</em> it was at 1 o'clock"
Even now I had still remembered the game between Japan and Paraguay. -- Wrong formation because you are using past instead of present tense.
"Even now I still remember the game at johannesburg between japan and Paraguay."
All the japan players persist in their fight at the last minute.- meaning is wrong<em>"All the Japanese players persist despite resistance or persists through rains."</em>
<em>Persist - means never giveup. </em>
<em>Rest of your passage, Please try to correct on your own. Finally, this is FYI.</em>
<em>Both " I like to watch" and "like watching" are correct and it often doesn't matter which you use. In British English, there is sometimes a difference between " I like doing " and " I like to do ".</em>
But finally they lost the game. Every player sat on the grass and their eyes turned red. I could never forget that.
I think football is just like a small war, people in the football pitch must use all their wisdom and energy to defend the other side. They must catch every chance and manage to kick a ball around. Even though playing football is a very dangerous game, in the game I found a kind of spirit which always touched me a lot. That is team work.
so anyway, this is why I like watching football game, thank you.0 votedJune 23, 20111soon she became a mother...
shinta was her name. she is my friend, we were friends since elementary school. now she is pregnant, the doctor said she will give birth next month. Let's <em>hope she</em> gives <em>birth</em> on stage! (or) I <em>hope she</em> has her babies soon!
Dont mention it as process. Process means the act of proceeding; continued forward movement; procedure; progress; advance.
0 votedJune 23, 20111- Language Issues......
This group actingup past few months, very upset but I wont give up.
Let start with new discussion..."Language Issues". If anybody is interested, can share their views.
Language Issues: Language is an important element of culture. It should be realized that regional differences may be subtle. For example, one word may mean one thing in one Latin American country, but something off-color in another. It should also be kept in mind that much information is carried in non-verbal communication. In some cultures, we nod to signify “yes” and shake our heads to signify “no;” in other cultures, the practice is reversed.
Language is the main cause of all problems. I knew the language is culture because of that people are getting segregated. Which creates so many problems among peoples. All i love is "one world", "one language" and "one culture".
I just want to remind you the lyrics of MJ....."<em>Heal the World - Make it a better Place -For you and for me! And the entire human race.</em>"
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