Carlos Vásquez
Spanish
May 4, 2021
un placer conocerte Brandon y espero poder ayudarte mucho a mejorar y practicar el idioma.
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Great job! Watch out for your use of definite articles! With abstract nouns like globalization you don't need the definite article in English.
the positive and the negative sides of globalization
When the humanity want to mean the word globalization, first need to know your history.(unclear meaning here) Perhaps you mean something like: Before we can know what is meant by the word globalization, we must first know its In my opinion the globalization began in United kingdom with the industrial revolution. After that the world change (=changed) totally, and it started to develop a lot (many) of kinds of machines. As a result the (article here not needed) countries started to have an economic system in (not needed) rooted to industry, after that the world have been started (the word started/ or began) to interchange their products with each other’s (with each other). This is globalization, but what are the positive and negative points about.