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Why china is one of the most important countries in the world? Recent years, China has a big change in many aspects, such as financial status, political status. Personally speaking, I think china has become one of the most important countries in the word. First of all, the amount of Chinese is so huge that this country has become the biggest country in the world. We can find Chinese anywhere around the world, sometimes, even though a small town in a little country there are many steps of Chinese. As an individual identity in the society net, I have many friends who are in other countries. In some big cities like Beijing or shanghai where are always a lot of people gathering there. We cannot ignore such this big country with so many peoples. Second, China does really make a big progress in developing finance. It has surpassed Japan and became the second financial figure in the world. The speed of finance growing was very fast and this make Chinese’s life a great improved. Nowadays, China are full of electronic devices which means people can buy anything without cash or bank card and just pay the fees through their mobile phone. The public transportation of China is awesome that including subway, train, bus and taxi. Finance is one of the most important reasons that China has become the most important country in the world. Last, China has more and more international influence in the world. As a united nation security council, China always devoted to solve some problems and respect other countries. As far as I know, China started a program named Legend of Silk-road which aimed at developing the trade between China and other countries. This program has gained a bunch of countries agreements and made a series of influence around the world. In the final analysis, I think all of these reasons that make China so important.

Language partner I am a college student who major in chinese language and literature,and i wanna find a native speaker who speak english . It is really nice if we can help each other .By the way, i can use skype and wechat,well, i am very patient~[emoji]

This is molly... This is Molly from China, please contact me if you are interest in Chinese culture or food.I have both skype and wechat id.

please contact me if u want to know Chinese food&culture. :) I am a college student who major in chinese language and literature,and i wanna find a native speaker who speak english . It is really nice if we can help each other .By the way, i can use skype and wechat,well, i am very patient~:)