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    August 30, 2018
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    Mi Vida en Alaska

    Vivo en Alaska.
    Es una parte de (los) (It sounds way more natural if you omit the article when talking about the US, It sounds like saying "I come from the United States Of America, which would be weird) Estados Unidos pero se siente como un país completamente diferente ("diferente completamente" is ok too, but it doesn't sound natural) . La cultura es especial y única. Vivo en un pueblito cerca del mar donde somos pescadores. Trabajo en negocios internacionales de mariscos (this sounds weird, what did you want to say?). Mi novio es (un)(Using the article here is ok, but when talking about your profession is better to just leave it out ;)) pescador y todos los días de pesca, (él)(Since we already know you're taling about your boyfriend, writing the pronoun sounds unnatural) me trae pescado fresco. Mi favorito es el salmón salvaje y lo (this makes reference to the salmon, if you didn't write the "lo" there, you'd basically be saying "I eat three times a week", not meaning you eat salmon three times a week, which would literally mean you only eat three times a week, which I don't think is waht you meant) como más de tres veces por semana--¡Mi corazón está muy saludable!

    [Por favor corrijan mis errores (Remember in Spanish we have singular and plural "you", and since you're writing this on a blog where many people are going to read it, you need to use the plural imperative)(btw, just saying "corrijan" sounds very rude! I know this probably wasn't your intention, but try using pospretérito next time "¿Podrían corregirme?")(and since "Corregir" is a transitive verb, it is better to always mention the object). Entiendo que me faltan acentos pero no sé cómo escribirlos] Gracias. Good job!
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    August 16, 2018
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