let me introduce myself

I woold would like to introduce myself, My name is Larisa, I'm from Russian. I wont want to speek speak English, but I don't have many much time for to study. I need help with practice.

Nice to meet you, Larisa! Great job on your writing!! :)

I would like someone to correct my diary entry( or to tell me the natural way of saying some things below. But I would be glad even if you JUST CORRECT my entry) I was wondering if you could do that for me, please?

JUST A DIARY ENTRY ON Oct.25th

<strike>So</strike> Do you have something you like to read, like a particular magazine? <strike>I mean, in other words</strike>, I <strike>have read</strike> regularly read a magazine which <strike>read trend clothes in this </strike><strike>season</strike> shows the clothes that are trending each season. It is called "Safari". To be honest, the clothes that celebs wear, like the actors living in California, is totally expensive to me. But, I <strike>have</strike> do not read this <strike>to want</strike> to purchase the clothes in this magazine, (<<I would change that comma to a period) I just want to <strike>just</strike> see <strike>them</strike> how they wear the clothes, and then I <strike>would</strike> just buy clothes similar to them. Yes, of course it is far cheaper than the clothes <strike>in</strike> in the magazine. I <strike>am thinking</strike> imagine that there are people like me in Japan <strike>than I imagine</strike>..There <strike>is</strike> are not <strike>much </strike> many rich people like Hollywood <strike>solubility</strike> celebrities in Japan, you know? <strike>Many</strike> There are many people in Japan who like to spend everyday normally, like going to the supermarket or doing something with friends after school or work.

You must have a good sense of fashion, then. ;) You did a good job on your writing!!

En la tienda

Carlos y Alexandra van a las de compras a menudo. Alex se prueba un vestido caro en la tienda, pero carlos no se pone bravo. Ella normalmente no gasta mucho dinero en la tienda, a pesar de tardarse en comprar la ropa. Alex se va al probador, se desviste/se quita la ropa, se prueba varios vestidos de designers famosos, se ve en el espejo, y asi se olvida de Carlos. Él se cansa de esperarle, se sienta en un sofá y se duerme. Mientras Carlos duerme, Alex se va a la zapatería y se prueba varios zapatos. Después se va a probar perfumes y maquillajes y se compra muchos productos de belleza. Está segura de que Carlos no se ponerá pondrá enfadado porque ella no ha gastado demasiado. Por fin, Alex se despide a de la venderora y se va a encontrar con Carlos. Su marido se despierta y se sorprende cuando ve a su esposa con tantas bolsas, ponendose un poco preocupado. Alex le explica que no había gastado mucho dinero, y él se calma/tranquiliza. Se van entonces a la cafetería para merendar. Como de costumbre/como siempre, ya es tarde , deciden no ir al departamento de caballeros y volven vuelven a su casa.

Muy buen trabajo!! :D

Find a new apartment

Last week I started looking for a new apartment because now where I live, we are many people there are many people living with me in the same house. This house has four bedrooms and currently eight people live there in total. I think it's not good that many people live in the same house because you do not have enough space.
I like to enjoy the pleasant company of friends  (<<I added that here, but I'm not sure if this is what you want to say here), I enjoy a bit of tranquillity tranquility and a little silence. It seems that today I was lucky and finally I finally found a new house with fewer people.

~Good job on your writing!! I have never been in your situation before, but I can only imagine how stressful it must be to live with so many people. I am so glad you found a better place. :)

New job ;)

New Job


This week began my trainning training in my new job at a good company called "Atento". I think it is a good company to develop your English skills and growing areas to get more experience. At first I was nervous because it was my first time working at a call center, then I started to investigate and I realized it is a good opportunity. My work schedule is pretty good because it's a part-time job. My trainning training will last for two weeks to know about the product and services.

First of all, congratulations on getting a new job!! I think this is a very good opportunity for you. And about your English writing, I think you did a really good job! Keep up the good work! ;)

Yes, you wrote this sentence correctly. :)

I am <strike>in lack</strike> lacking <strike>of</strike> sleep. My work is not so busy <strike>in</strike> these days. I lose myself in a online game.<strike> I regret every day to spend</strike> Everyday I regret spending too much time gaming, but I cannot help doing it.

Good work in your writing. :) Video games can be very addicting. I hope you get the sleep you need soon.

I am tired today.
Because I have 4 lessons at my university, and I have to write a report <strike>until</strike> for (<<I put "for" because "until" would mean that you will keep writing the report today and tomorrow. "For" means you need to turn-in your report tomorrow) tomorrow.
I have many things to do.
So I feel there <strike>are</strike> is no time.

Very good job! I hope you get some rest soon. :)