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    Pet Ginger

    My friend found a cat three months ago. She couldn't dare a bear the thought to of taking  take him in to the shelter. Because  As I really wanted to keep a cat, I grabbed him and brought him to our house.
    That kitten was very small - only 1 months old. I called him Ginger. For the At first time, he was scared of us, but later the kitten  he ran all over our room and became friendly. My husband and I bought a litter-tray, a bowl, and a cat-house which he never slept in. The kitten He managed to sleep everywhere - on the floor, on the stool, on the bed, but not in the cat-house a due place.
    During For the past 2 months Ginger has scratched our arms and legs, slept on the bed between us, behaved like we were his slaves ... in other words he began to remember behave as if  he was that in ancient times when cats was were like a Gods! However, we love this insolent cheeky kitten.
    The cat's life of 16 years is equivalent to 80 years of human life. Yesterday I imagined thought, if Ginger had spent 4 months in the shelter's cell, it would have been equivalent to 6 years of human life.


    Hi Titiana

    What a lucky kitten to have found you - he sounds lovely.  If you have any questions about my suggested corrections, please do ask.  This was a good piece of writing with only minimal changes needed - well done.

    Kind regards, Ruth 



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