今天我不做很多的东西事情(If it had already happened, you can say 今天我没有做很多事(情), while if you are planning to do nothing and just be relaxed, you can say 今天我不打算/准备做很多事)(东西 means an object, like a book, a cake, etc. )，很放松啊

我也吃的全部都是蛋糕，哈哈，太好吃了！我平时没有(I feel adding 有 is better)吃很多的蛋糕，可是这个是我自己做的这个蛋糕，因此很新鲜和温暖，也还有花生酱和黑糖在里面(you can also say 而且里面还有花生酱和黑糖)，很甜和也很好吃啊！下午我完成了一些文件，然后我休息了一下(一会 better)，我也还看到一些小孩在外面玩捉迷藏，他们大声的倒数"十，九，八，几七，六。。。"，我很喜欢看小孩玩得很开心。

今天我们庆祝复活节

早上是很冷和而且(in fact, 和, 而且both mean 'and', but here you should use 而且, I give you some examples about these two words. 他和我都很喜欢这本书；今天我们吃了蔬菜和肉；他很热心而且善良)下了雨，

可是下午有太阳，多数人是很放松的(是很放松的/很放松, so if you add 是 at the beginning, remember add 的 in the end)，没有压力，可是今天和明天多数商店是会(会 feels like going to)关闭门，因此星期六我们在超市看到了很多人。我们去散步的时候，看到一个女人在(was doing)喂鸟类(鸟类 is the generic term for all birds. we usually say 在喂小鸟 unless this bird is big, not little)，

天啊，忽然太多鸟类来了，太多了啊！(some people also prefer to say 超多啊, it also means too many)我爸爸的电脑今天有(出现了, 有 makes sense, but we like saying 电脑出(现)了一个问题)一个问题，我帮助他修理它，他刚才写信给我，现在电脑预期了运作良好(可以正常使用/工作了)(if you want to say your father anticipates this computer will work well, you can say 现在电脑应该可以正常工作/使用了, 应该 feel like a kind of guess. However, if you want to say your father have used this computer and found it worked well, you can say 现在电脑(已经=already)可以正常使用/工作了)。

我刚才变得(突然=suddenly, I think it caters for the situation you want to express)感到/感觉饿了

哈哈，明天我会去(adding 去, it feels like 'gonig to do')买，做巧克力蛋糕的配料原料/原材料(配料likes you buy some cookies, and you can find some main ingredients which can be used to make cookies. And also we can say 我给这个菜加了些配料，它更好吃了, it means apart from the basic elements for this dish, I add some other things which make it tasty)，我已经期待吃的。

昨天我花了(adding 了 feels like it happened in the past)许多小时(时间)，尝试解决一个问题，今天我终于解决了，我很喜欢专注于某事，总是可以学习到(adding 到 feels like you have already learned)很多的东西！

我上周我跟我的一个同事讨论，关于什么地方是非常棒会适合去玩的问题(if you use 关于 at the beginning, you need to add 的问题in the end. you can also say上周我跟我的一个同事讨论，什么地方是非常适合去玩的)(here 适合 implys that the site is good enough to enjoy )，因为夏季天(夏季is formal)会来得很快！(因为夏天就快来了is better)

今天的午餐(you can also say 今天中午)我们只吃了一点点食物，因为我们没有不是很饿，我们吃了(have alrealy happened)一些芸豆和玉米，它很太容易做了(here you should not use 了, even if it has already happend, I suppose it is a habit, but you can also think that 'it is easy to cook'feels like an objective reality, whether you cook it or not)，很好吃啊！