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    "She"

    She has glasses and long hair . She is always worried about me and what I do. all my things. For example when I have problems in my homework she will help me solve the problems (like Chinese), and when i am hungry she can cook a good dish for the family . When I was child, she bought me many things . When I got a cold, she cooked porridge for me, and hoped me can that I would get better soon . Sometimes she is like a tiger when I make mistakes . She is indispensable in my life. Did you guess who she isher? Right, she is my mom, i love her very much, and I want to thank her for raising me so much.and caring about me so much.
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    - I t -

    It has a big, black body.
    It has fifty-two white teeth like the white clouds in the sky, and thirty-six black teeth.
    Each teeth have different voices.
    It has three feet.
    The foot at the rightmost can keep the sound going for long time.
    The foot in the middle can make the sound lower.
    It doesn't have any features at the far left.
    It can sing high-pitched like woman and also can sing bass like man.
    It can sing rhythmic fast songs, and let people feel excited,happy,and manymuch more.
    It can also sing gentle love songs which may make people feel leisurely, and tenderenjoyed...
    It is my favorite instrument - the piano.
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    My last weekend

    Hey guys! How's it going?
    Today I'd like to share with you how was my weekend was.

    On Saturday, my wife made a lasagna and we brought it to my dad's house. He simply loved it and ate it a lot! It was really tasty. It waters my mouth just to remember it.My mouth waters when I think about it.
    At night, we went to a friend's house. YourHis mom passed away on Thursday, after a long battle against Alzheimer that lasted for 8 years. She was in vegetative state. It must be terrible seeing your loved one fading slowly in front of you. So we went the to talk with him and try to cheer him up. He looks ok with the situation. I mean... he's not desperate. I suppose that he thinks that she finally is relieved from her suffering.

    On Sunday, my wife and I went to a barbecue at lunch time. It was a celebration of mom's friend. There was so much good food and it was delicious. Two types of lasagna, feijoada (brazilian food made with black beans, pork sausage, bacon and other stuff), chicken, pork, meat... Man... it was awesome! I ate it until I was stuffed, haha.
    At night, I went to a baby's anniversary. He was turning 11 months. We had a chocolate cake and soda. I'm trying to avoid soda but yesterday I didn't resist to it and I drunk a small glass.

    Thanks for correcting this text. I'll see you guys soon. Have a great week!
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    About buying a fridge

    So, we have wanted to buy a new fridge for a long time . My wife dreams about it, and often asks me to buy a new one. Our old fridge is fine, it is working well, but it has really too small a size for us. Besides, it is quite an obsolete model and it causes us some discomfort uncomfortables. That is, we should often need to defrost it. When we do, huge lumps of ice melt and the water is goes everywhere. For doing completing this process faster we have installed a fan. There is a lot of water we need toshould wipe and pour away. By the way, it is some kind of innovation and this is a good tip for those who still use the old technology fridges. The other thing is a modern fridge with non-frost technology. But it is often said says that non frost technology can have a drying effect on food.has it own lack of drying food. To prevent this the products should be wrapped in film. The most liked benefit of a new fridge is that it has a function of intensive freezing which allows us to freeze fresh products. This option is so important for us because we grow fruits and vegetables at my mother's garden. And you know it is so delicious and enjoyable having pleasing in winter to have something that was grown by yourself in summer. Spring is coming soon and buying the fridge sounds great!
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    Tabriz 2018

    Tourism ministers of Islamic countries selected the historical city of Tabriz as the capital of Islamic tourism in 2018.

    On the final day of the 9th Islamic Conference of Tourism Ministers (December 21-23) in Niamey, Niger, ministers of tourism of the Organization of Islamic Cooperation (OIC) member states approved the selection of Tabriz as the capitals of Islamic tourism in 2018.

    Numerous famous Islamic cities were nominated as the possible candidates, among which Tabriz was chosen, thanks to its cultural and historical potential, its beauty and all of its brilliant future for tourism. This magnificent title will definitely be the most important  of all the international achievements of Tabriz. 

    Tabriz municipality, along with all other effective organizations of the city, appreciates this valued opportunity, trying to take all necessary strides to introduce this beautiful Iranian city to the world and attract world's tourists and explorers.

    Indeed, the old history, rich culture, brilliant civilization, unique tourist attractions, undeniable social potentials, lovely weather , traditional sites, modern shopping centers and a vast array of capabilities in different fields can help Tabriz with realizing the goals of Tabriz 2018.
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    She is a girl who I want to be.

    She is Audrey KATHLEEN Hepburn RUSTON. The beauty of a woman is not in the clothes she wears.The beauty of a woman must be seen from in her eyes. Because that is the doorway to her heart - the place where love resides. I think she is not just beautiful but also kind. When she was older she went to Africa to help those who need help. So I really love her. She is a woman who I want to be.
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