Could you please correct the essay? Thank you! 谢谢! Chinese mothers. Chinese mothers are very busy. They prepare breakfast, lunch and dinner. Because of this, the family can eat. They work hard. Chinese mothers are teachers, journalists, doctors, farmers,... Chinese mothers take care of the family. Their sons, daughters, husband, mother and father are happy because of them. The entire family loves its mother. Moreover, they make very nice tea! 中国母亲 中国母亲很忙。她们
要准备早饭,午饭和晚饭
给家人吃。 所以家可以吃饭。 她们努力工作。中国
做母亲是老师,记者,医生, 农
民......(no comma and use six dots to express ellipsis)中国母亲
保重非常顾家。她们
的儿子,女儿, 先生
(also can say丈夫, this is more popular)妈妈和爸爸
(formal:母亲和父亲)为此(because of them)都
很快乐
多亏她们(if you want use this four words, please put them in the head of the sentence)。
全家
人(family:家人,home:家, entire:全)都爱中国妈妈。 还
有,他们做
的茶很好!