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    我<strike>的</strike>第一天在大连

    在我老家,我哭了在飞机场。(我在机场哭了)我不想离开<strike>我</strike>妈妈,我不想一个人去这么<strike>悠远</strike>(遥远)的地方。她的拥抱很<strike>温柔(</strike>温暖),跟我说再见。我才19岁。

    在飞机上,我睡不<strike>觉</strike>(着)。我在要在巴黎、上海<strike>,都要换个飞机</strike>(转机),一共要24个多小时<strike>多</strike><strike>了</strike>。我的大学<strike>教师</strike>(教授)已经<strike>帮了我找</strike>(帮我找了)一个中国家庭,他们说<strike>我能这年根</strike>(今年我能跟)他们一起住。可是我只知道他<strike>的名字</strike>叫刘老师。他的照片,联系方式,甚至电话号码<strike>,</strike>我都没有。他们说他肯定会在大连<strike>飞机场</strike>(机场)<strike>看见(</strike>接)我,而且他<strike>回</strike>(会)带一个<strike>大名片写上我的名字</strike>。(写着我名字的大牌子。)

    我 <strike>本来(</strike>刚开始)很紧张。从上海到大连的飞机只要两个小时。可是(在这架飞机上)只有我一个外国人<strike>在这个飞机</strike>,<strike>别的人</strike>(其他人)都是中国人,(他们)都说中国话。我已经学了两年汉语,<strike>可是</strike>(但是)完全听不懂。<strike>可是</strike>(我感觉)越来越累,就没有<strike>生动感觉紧张</strike>(紧张感了),只想睡觉。

    我们到大连了,我才觉得很兴奋<strike>了</strike>。我<strike>会有机会</strike>(能去)洗脸,<strike>去</strike>(上)厕所,等等!我<strike>已经</strike>(快)累死了。我一到大连飞机场就<strike>近</strike>去卫生间,<strike>。我</strike>就觉得好多了。不知道我在卫生间呆了多久,可是等我出来的时候,<strike>我</strike>看到别的<strike>游客(</strike>旅客)都已经走了,只有我一个人的行李还在传送带上!我取回行李后,还要办理通关手续。

    我找不到刘老师,他<strike>看了别的游客都来比我早</strike>(看到别的旅客都比我出来得早),他以为我不在飞机上。我又想哭了!我没有他的联系方式,我的手机在中国不能用,我真的不知道该怎么办了。。。

    我找到了一个公用<strike>的</strike>电话,给<strike>我</strike>妈妈打电话,可是没有人在。我等了十分钟,然后一个男人来问我“你是Lynnette Martin 吗?你会说中国话吗?”。 我听不懂他说什么,可是我很高兴他找到了我!他也不会说英语,我安静得跟着他去找他的车。

    然后我们坐车去他<strike>的</strike>家,我从窗户第一次看<strike>看</strike>到中国。那时候,我还不知道这个人是谁,可是好像他认识我,我只是希望他不要骗我。我用很简单的英文问他:”Who are you?” 他回答了: “you will live in my house”。

    欢迎你到大连。
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    October 13, 2010
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    吃饭跟朋友(跟朋友吃饭)
    In general, words or phares before and after 跟(prep.) belong to the same type or at least comparable.for example, 面包跟米饭一样好吃。here you omit the subject 我,我 and 朋友are the same sentence elements

    今天的课关于吃饭跟朋友。<font color="#ff6600">(今天的课是关于跟朋友吃饭的)</font>

    我常吃完晚饭后喝茶。我最喜欢的家常菜是茄丝面。你最喜爱的是什么?你<strike>是</strike>常做家常菜,
    1.Alternative relation是.......还是
    The clauses state different things that are alternatives, and only one of them is chosen.For example, 你是明天去,还是后天去?
    还是<strike>你</strike>常去餐厅?
    2.when the subject of the two clauses are identical, the second ususally doesn't occur and the first comes at the beginning of the whole sentence.the conjunction 还是should be placed after the subject.
    现在我要走了,开饭喽! 
    Forms expressing the changing aspect of an action 
    The pattern 要......了 formed by the adverb 要 and the modal particle了 may be used to indicate that an action is going to change or to take place relatively soon. the basic pattern is:(subject)+adverbial adjunct (the  adverb要)+predicate (verb) +(object)+ 了
    for example ,他要开学了。
    verbs phares indicating that an action is going to take place should be inserted into 要......了 in which了 is at the end of the sentence. 
    This is posted from my blog: http://bit.ly/8XcBYb - a day in chinese
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    July 22, 2010
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    Hello, James!I know "A Practical Chinese Grammar for Foreigners(Revised Edition)which in Chinese is《外国人实用汉语语法》written by李德津and程美珍,revised by 李德津and金德厚,pressed by Beijing Language and Culture University Press.Hope you find it helpful.Bythe way ,if you have some questions about chinese grammar ,maybe you can ask me directly.this book is in my hand.
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    March 3, 2010
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    you can give your rabbit's name is 小乖乖 it means the rabbit is very cute and obedient.or 贝贝it means baby.i hope you will like them
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    September 10, 2009
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    失望is a verb. it means lose hope or confidence. in english, you say i disappoinrted you,didn't i?but in chinese, we say 我令你失望了吗?我使你失望了吗?我让你失望了吗?in these sentences, "令、使、让"means make.I make you feel disappointed.,do i?让in chinese grammar,the pivotal sentence is also a sentence with a verbal predicate.its predicate is composed of two verbal phrases.the object of the first verb is simultaneously the subject of the second verb.the first verb in a pivotal sentence should be a verb with a meaning of "making"or "ordering"somebody to do something.
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    July 1, 2009
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    说话就是一般人与人之间谈话..2个或多个人交谈(说话:2 or more people chat) 讲话就是一个人讲,其他人不说话.其他人听(讲话:one people speech, other people just listen not speak)
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    June 9, 2009
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