我的中文作业 请帮忙改

我的经历在北京的经历是很有趣。我学习了很多的事情关于中国文化，我实话说我不想离开。
虽然我在北京只呆了三个半星期，但是我还没习惯中国的生活。 我感觉我刚刚到了北京。以前我从来没来过巨大的城市。刚开始，我来北京的时候我的汉语是很差，做简单的事情是都很难，。但是躲熬过有些的这段时间以后，我开始了理解明白怎么享受这里的生活。，学会了学习从怎么还价，到怎么在饭店点菜在饭店。 我觉得我花安排我的时间是很明智的地， 。我们去过了很多很有名的地方比如说长城或者和天安门广场。我有空的时候我喜欢花很多时间参观。
我的最喜欢的地方是颐和园和朝阳公园。颐和园的风景很美丽和安静。我真的很喜欢颐和园。 在北京国际汉语学院学习汉语的经验是很有用。我见面了很多的好朋友并且见面了遇到了非常好的教师。我不但会想念北京而且也会想念我的同学和教师 我在北京的记忆是很温暖和。

Introduce Myself

Hello, I am very happy to meet many friends here. My name is Irene, a 27-year-old Chinese lady. I have studied English many years, but as with many Chinese students, my oral English is not very good. I am always nervous when I speak. So it's very necessary for me to have a language partner. I also can teach you Chinese.We can communicate by Skype or MSN in our spare time. If you have the same idea as I do, please contact me.Thank you.

自我介绍。

我在italki已经用英文写过了，但是我还没有用汉语自我介绍。

你应该已经知道我的名字了，如果不知道，可以看网页上面。我的汉语名字叫安林杰。我在康涅狄格长大的，在宾夕法尼亚州和萨凡纳和芝加哥住过，在芝加哥的大学学习过声乐，现在我住在西安。

十个半月以前我到了西安，合同还有两个月到期，我决定再留在西安一年。在西安的时候我试着提高自己。有三个目标。第一，提高我的语言，提高汉语最重要的，然后多用我的葡萄牙语，还要学习德语。第二，一个星期练习五次钢琴。我到西安来没有太好练习过，不能找任何借口的。第三个，我要锻炼。如果我做到这三个目标，我会比以前更有信心，让自己变的更好。

I've written on italki before, but I haven't really introduced myself.

You probably already know my name. If you don't, it's at the top of the page! In Chinese, my name is An Linjie. I'm from Connecticut, but I've lived in Pennsylvania, Savannah, and Chicago. I studied acoustics there in university, and now I live in Xi'an.

I arrived ten and a half months ago, and my contract has two months left. I've already decided to stay another year, and while I'm here I'm going to try and improve myself. I have three goals: number 1, improve my languages. Most important is improving my Chinese, then I want to actually use my Portuguese and study German. Number 2, I want to practice piano five times a week. I've never been good at practicing, and with no real excuse. Number 3, I want to exercise. If I do all three of these things, it will make me more confident. I can change myself for the better!