你好！我叫Alexandra。我今年二十六岁。我是美国人，但是我住在泰国。我<strike>叫</strike>说英语。我的两个学生今年分别十二岁和十七岁。<strike>每天我</strike>我每天都穿<strike>条</strike>裙子和<strike>件</strike>衬衫。泰国很热。今天虽说不太热，很凉快<strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">和</strike>而且刮风。六月我将会搬迁到中国。我<strike>叫</strike>只会说英语。我很激动但是也紧张。我<strike>烦恼</strike>担心我没有朋友。我想学习汉语因为我想<strike>说汉语</strike>跟中国人说汉语。

这个假期我去了不少的地方。因为我的亲人家人住在不一样的地方，我和太太在巴西旅行了很多地方。 我们去了巴西利亚，尚保罗州 和 圣卡塔琳娜州。访问拜访了家人以后我们去了海滩。我们在巴西参观来到了萨尔瓦多 和莫罗尚保罗， 但是我们觉得还不够，所以我们回来墨西哥的时候去了科苏梅尔。
这假期有点苛刻累人, 因为每一个访问的地方都不近所以这是一次不容易的旅行。圣卡塔琳娜州是在巴西的南方， 尚保罗州是在巴西的东南部，巴西利亚是在巴西的中东部，萨尔瓦多 和莫罗尚保罗 是在巴西的西北部，最后还有科苏梅尔是在墨西哥南方。出了距离在这以外，巴西和墨西哥之间的交通也不太方便。尽管距离很远，但是假期很棒，我们玩的非常愉快。
<strike>这</strike>旅行的第一站是在巴西利亚，我的丈母岳母住在那里。巴西利亚很有意思。巴西的首都建于1960年，按照现代主义的观念，在世界上没有一样的城市。在巴西利亚郊外有很多漂亮的瀑布. 我和太太在那漂亮的瀑布旁度过了两天。老师说，瀑布的水有点儿冷，游泳长时间可能不太舒服。访问拜访丈母岳母<strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">和</strike>并游玩了瀑布以后我们去了尚保罗州。
我的父母住在尚保罗州。这是巴西最发达的地区。他们住在圣若泽杜斯坎普斯城，一个重要的技术中心。我的童年朋友(发小)住在尚保罗州。大部分住在圣若泽杜斯坎普斯， 两个住在尚保罗市，还有一个朋友住在桑托斯市，一个海滩城市，然而，幸福的事是，我们头会第一次一起做了烤肉。在我的城市里没有太多事情要做，所以一般来说，我们都会呆在父母的家里。
第三站是在圣卡塔琳娜州，这是巴西南方一个小州。这一个小州最初是由意大利人，俄罗斯人和德国人殖民首先开发的。大部分是德国人的民族住所. 太太的外祖父母住在若因维利 ，一个小城市在圣卡塔琳娜州。在那里有很多的德国民族人，所以很多人说德语。那里的飞机场标志用德语和葡萄牙语。说实话，即使若因维利没有很多旅游景景点，我也觉得访问这个城市有意思。
我们从若因维利离开去萨尔瓦多。这是我第一次在来到萨尔瓦多，所以我很兴奋。萨尔瓦多是巴伊亚州的首都。巴伊亚州文明非常特别，比如说那里基督教和非洲的宗教混杂在一起。他们的餐食物也很有意思，跟别的巴西餐不一样。总的来说巴西餐不辣，可是巴伊亚餐又辣又香。我觉得所有的巴西人都需要访问可以来萨尔瓦多。
我们在巴西最以后站最后一站是莫罗山保罗，一个非常漂亮的海岛。莫罗山保罗离萨尔瓦多不太远，乘船需要两个小时。在海滩我和太太住了三天在一家精品酒店在一家精品酒店住了三天。我们休息了两天，吃很多吓虾和并在海滩游泳。在最后一天我们在岛上乘船，这是非常漂亮的地方。
我们从巴伊亚回来墨西哥成城。我们在家洗衣服，休息了两天，然后去了科苏梅尔。科苏梅尔是坎昆附近的一个海岛。在科苏梅尔，我们一起潜水和浮潜. 我们跟鱼，海龟, 和黄貂鱼一起游泳。可以潜水对我来说是一件<strike>潜水</strike>非常兴奋的事。因为所有的事情必须我的假期结束了，所以从科苏梅尔以后我就回来回到了墨西哥成城。

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    总的来说，你的中文不错！只不过以下是你需要注意的地方。
1，注意写信的格式，每一段开头之前需要空出两个字的位置，“此致敬礼”的此致前需要空格。
2，在中文里，一些小毛病容易引起歧义，我帮你修正了，一些句型也需要注意。
3，要注意敬语的使用，这样有助于与中国人交往。

I am studying english at home and I have done this essay about housework. What How do you think?

It is common that the most young(youngest) people, when they leave their parents’ home, they feel lost lose of regarding housework. They are not used to do it, it is not the part of their normal life and they see it as an annoying task. This is because of parents, normally women, do most of it, while I think it is a job that and should be shared equally among all family members.

Nobody has more or less time than the others to do housework. (Everybody has the equal time in doing housework) As parents' Parents work, children go to school and <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">both</strike> still have to do things after as their obligations. However, people is not still still not aware of that housework is a part of the everyday life and everyone should be involved( included) in it since we are were kids, since it is was an activity we need to learn although because we also have to be kids and do kids things.

Without <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</strike> doubt, parents are the ones who do housework better as they are more experienced and care more about it, whereas young people only wants want to do it quickly and continue with to do their things.

In conclusion, I think parents should make their children do bit by bit a little housework, so they get used to it and acquire(do) it as a normal activity that so it has not to won't be bored.

I am studying english at home and I have done this essay about housework. What How do you think?

It is common that the most young(youngest) people, when they leave their parents’ home, they feel lost lose of regarding housework. They are not used to do it, it is not the part of their normal life and they see it as an annoying task. This is because of parents, normally women, do most of it, while I think it is a job that and should be shared equally among all family members.

Nobody has more or less time than the others to do housework. (Everybody has the equal time in doing housework) As parents' Parents work, children go to school and <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">both</strike> still have to do things after as their obligations. However, people is not still still not aware of that housework is a part of the everyday life and everyone should be involved( included) in it since we are were kids, since it is was an activity we need to learn although because we also have to be kids and do kids things.

Without <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</strike> doubt, parents are the ones who do housework better as they are more experienced and care more about it, whereas young people only wants want to do it quickly and continue with to do their things.

In conclusion, I think parents should make their children do bit by bit a little housework, so they get used to it and acquire(do) it as a normal activity that so it has not to won't be bored.

I am studying english at home and I have done this essay about housework. What How do you think?

It is common that the most young(youngest) people, when they leave their parents’ home, they feel lost lose of regarding housework. They are not used to do it, it is not the part of their normal life and they see it as an annoying task. This is because of parents, normally women, do most of it, while I think it is a job that and should be shared equally among all family members.

Nobody has more or less time than the others to do housework. (Everybody has the equal time in doing housework) As parents' Parents work, children go to school and <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">both</strike> still have to do things after as their obligations. However, people is not still still not aware of that housework is a part of the everyday life and everyone should be involved( included) in it since we are were kids, since it is was an activity we need to learn although because we also have to be kids and do kids things.

Without <strike style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a</strike> doubt, parents are the ones who do housework better as they are more experienced and care more about it, whereas young people only wants want to do it quickly and continue with to do their things.

In conclusion, I think parents should make their children do bit by bit a little housework, so they get used to it and acquire(do) it as a normal activity that so it has not to won't be bored.