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[162 Verbal fights before the sunrise appeared in Seam Reap.]

Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
you go about writing it?
Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand this.

I was waiting for the sunrise appeared from the back of the building of the Angkor Wat for long time, also I was squatting down on the edge of stones.

Gradually, the sightseers had come to each of the spots. There were approximately over a ten thousand people and I saw some verbal fights.

There were some people standing in front, the many in the back of people couldn’t witness the sunrise a nice angle. So the back of one asked and favored to in front of them that sit down or squat down on the ground.

Some of them sat down Immediately, a woman didn’t sit down. So some of back people yelled and shouted to the woman.

They said, “we can’t see the sunrise on the nice angle because you are standing!!”

They discussed hardly for about a ten minutes. Finally, the woman sat down in reluctant. Then they applauded, hands crapped and whistled. I was so surprised.

CORRECTION: 

I found myself squatting on the edge of the stones, eagerly waiting for the sun to make its entrance from the back of the Angkor Wat building. 

As (sightseers? what do you mean by sightseers?), the crowds began to stumbled upon each other with men and women screaming at each other in order to steal a good view. 

The Audience who sat on the back asked the people in the front to lower themselves on the ground in order to see the sunrise. However, a woman refused to sit, which created fits for the audience that was sitting behind her.

"Can you please sit down so your head is not covering the sunrise?!"

After ten minutes of complaining about the woman being inconsiderate, she finally decided to sit. Thus, everyone applauded and whistled in contentment. 

Note:

That is how I would write the essay. You need to try avoiding passive voice (was, were, is, are) and use active voice. It makes your essay smoother and draws your readers into your writing more. Avoid repeating the same thing: for example, " they applauded, hands crapped" 

You don't need to say hands crapped (it's clapped not crapped, so watch out for typos/spellings) because you already said " they applauded" 

Make sure you pay attention to grammar and " I was surprised" I feel like that's not necessary because it sounds like a run-off sentence. 

Also, explain what you mean by sightseers because I don't understand that part. 

Remember that this is a narrative essay. You need to draw the readers attention using literary devices such as metaphors and similes to make your essay stand out. 

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