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MADRID, AN EDUCATIONAL CITY.
Recently, I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">can attend</s> attended a cultural event at the Municipal History Museum of Madrid where a <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">brightened</s> brilliant exhibition <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">is</s> was/is being celebrated. It is focused <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in</s> on a brief but significant period <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">of</s> in the history of Spain, which <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">surrounds</s> ran from 1898 to 1938, highlighting profound curricular reforms in this area.
The route is organized in three pillars by chronological order: Firstly, in incipient period about last decades of nineteen century, when thousands of innovative schools were <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">planeated</s> planned and constructed. This new <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">type</s> form of teaching, “graduate<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">d</s> school”, was based <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in</s> on the <s>educate</s> education <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">to</s> of students of the same age while ancient “unitary schools”, mixed scholars of different <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">educative</s> educational levels. Secondly, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">other</s> another <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">epoch</s> period can be dated <s>circa</s> back to the twenties and starting of the thirties <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">decades</s>, whereby a new generation of intellectuals and teachers had a profound impact on development of renewal educational politics, remarking prominent figures as Giner de los Ríos or Sidonio Pintado. The next period <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">were</s> was the last years of the thirties <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">decades</s>, which <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">are</s> were marked by Spanish Civil War, characterized by the destruction of innumerable schools by bombs launched by the National band and a great number of deaths, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">specially</s> especially among children. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Finished </s>At the end of the conflict, repression was implacable, provoking cease and exile of a great number of republican teachers.
Among the diverse items exposed appear<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s>: maps, ancient books, original letters, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">laboratories</s> laboratory equipment and educational tools, contributing to <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">put in relevance</s> the context of their historical accuracies. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Emotionating</s> Exciting is the contemplation of <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">gingerly</s> the ginger calligraphy of letters written by a teenager to their his/her <s>letter-</s>friends/pen pals.
My historic knowledge <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">is renovated </s>has been rejuvenated by their humanist and practical perspectives, being a vital virtue of this exhibition. For this reason, I highly recommend visiting it.
