i wish i were a bird
[In English "I" is always written with capital I; I wish I ...]
Life is so hard without strength. [Perfect grammar and sentence structure]
Tonight is a silent night with me [Tonight is a silent night. Tonight is a silent night for me]
,it seems as disappear all of my strength with motivation.
[Subject + Verb + Object = all of my strength (S1) and motivation (S2) + disappear (V) ...]
[disappeared (past tense)]
[It seems all of my strength and motivation has disappeared.]
So,i am so tired for my life. [So, I am so tired of my life.]
Apparently, i am a poor english speaker and learning to be a better english speaker.
[Apparently, I am a poor english speaker and I am learning to be a better English speaker.]
i've been searching a partner till now but i see nobody for me.
[I've been searching for a partner until now but I see nobody for me.]
i often read articles while i am in italki but it hard to progress for the beginner without any conversation.
[I often read articles while I am at italki but it is hard to progress for a beginner without any conversation.]
i can not improve myself in speaking english and almost quit.
[I can not improve in speaking English, and I am almost quitting.]
But this is one of the best application i ever know in social media.
[But this is one of the best applications I have ever known of social media.]
But now i have no strength to move on yet and i decided to leave this application for a while
[But now I have no strength to move on and I have decided to leave this application for a while]
Hey man, don't quit! Language learning is hard. If you have a struggle but succeed, it will feel even better than if it was easy. Keep up the good work!
