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    Dear friends

    Dear friends,
    My name is Li Hua. <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Now</s> (not needed as you have written this in the present tense) I have found some of my schoolmates eating a snack during <s>the</s> mealtimes instead of a meal.<s> It's</s> I am concerned about <s>us</s> our health. As<s> us</s> students, we need enough nutrients. It's good <s>of</s> for our body and healthy. If we always eat snacks, we will become ill easily. We should eat <s>some</s> fresh <s>and</s> green vegetables.Students should <s>E</s> eat<s>ing</s> less <s>or</s> and <s>don't</s> not eat snacks. Eating a meal is very important. And we
    should <s>do</s> exercise everyday.
    Your's, Li Hua

    This is a good effort, and I had no problem understanding it. You need to pay attention to the indefinite article "a" and the definite article "the." I assume your native language does not have articles. The "have found" insertion is passive voice, which you may not have studied yet.
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    August 13, 2019
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    Good Morning! Greetings from India

    What a crazy start of the day. I Woke up at 5:30am, against instead of what I had planned planned yesterday last night, and had to rush to open my dairy shop, which I usually open at 6:30am at regularly. The shop is in a different town and it generally takes 45 minutes, in mornings, to get there in the morning so I usually start leave? at 5:30 - 5:40.

    These are mostly minor corrections, a native speaker would have no problem understanding this.

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    January 19, 2018
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    January 19, 2018
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    Email to Robin

    Robin,
    Thanks (thanks implies you would address Robin in the tú form, use "thank you" if you use usted with him/her) for inviting me to launch lunch and for coming to (on would be better,) the London trip with us.
    Would you like to stay tomorrow for lunch? If so, So, I will can (you need to choose either "will" or "can", but not both....will implies it is your firm intention to repay, can implies Robin has a choice) repay you.
    Let me know what your time availability is.
    David
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    January 19, 2018
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    I'm excited for my trip to Hawaii

    I bought a round trip ticket to Hawaii.
    I wanna want to see Luau, take a Jipline ??? and go dive in a shark cage.
    I can't wait for these this.
    Could you recommend to me (object not needed, implied by the context) the best place (to stay...to visit...etc...action verb infinitive helpful here) in Hawaii?
    I have time will be spending almost 8 days in there.
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    January 19, 2018
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