1. 这个故事本来让我感动，然后我发觉了<strike>故事</strike>它不是真的。
2. 公园离我办公室五公里左右。
3. 妈妈告诉孩子他需要在规定的时间内完成作业。
4. 我们怀疑我们的老板作弊。
5. 那只小狗又活泼又可爱。
6. 医生告诉我必须要<strike>减少</strike>降低血压。
7. 圣诞节后商店都降低了价格。
8. 去年那款手机比较新<strike>鲜</strike>，可是现在很普遍。
9. 我去中国度15天假，<strike>我</strike>需要签证吗？
10. 这个<strike>农村</strike>村子好像特别穷。

我不喜欢公共汽车

我家附近有公共汽车站。公共汽车来一次每小时来一次。我有自己的车之前，我常常坐公共汽车去坐学校。公共汽车比开车慢慢的。我可以每天开心地开车每天，但是我有点内疚对于污染大气有点内疚。每当我去城市我总是坐火车。我觉得坐火车没有不紧张。而且我喜欢看窗外。有时候我遇见好久不见的朋友我好久不见。

Just care more about the order of phrases in the sentences, and you will be better!

Agree with Liya.

"钱不是万能的，但是没有钱是万万不能的“。 Money is not omnipotent, but we can not live without money. In my opinion, money is something that builds up our living foundations, but it can not give us some of the happinesses on the top of the pyramid. On the other hand, we may lose most of our happiness without money.

There are not many differences between the mandarin from Taiwan and mainland, China. They are accually the same language. I come from the mainland, China. But I usually watch Taiwan TV shows. In my opinion, Taiwanese Chinese is more like a dialect from the southeast of China. it just has some slightly differences from that in the North of China.  We usually add "er" at the end of some nouns. Like "玩意‘’，we usually say it like“玩意儿”. But this never appears in Taiwanese Madarin and most dialect in the South part of China. And also They have different pronunciations for some words. Like "和‘’，We usually pronounce it like"河‘’ when it means "and" while the Taiwanese say it like "含". But anyway, If you learn either of those two, you can easily understand and communicate with people
from the other side of the sea. Hope this will help you.

<strike>唉呀，</strike>我刚刚吃了玉米饼干，<strike>可是</strike>现在我的舌痛，因为饼干很尖锐和硬！不过至少这些饼干是很好吃，哈哈，否则不值得<strike style="">要</strike>吃！写一个句子，改变一个句子，说明一个句子，多个词是一个句子。我很喜欢去夜市，可以看到和吃到很多不同种类的小食品，太棒<strike>啊</strike>了！<strike>特别</strike>我很喜欢他们做的新鲜<strike>做都</strike>食物，看<strike>到</strike>他们怎么做很有趣！