[ January 16 , 2018 ]

Hello!

I made a movie today.

It is need our weddingceremony .

It's about our wedding ceremony 

But It is dificult. difficult

I can't finish it.

by the way,

I want a friend who can teach me English.

I hope , to exchange a massages and call talk on the a phone.

But I can't speak English well.

And I am shy X）

Nice to meet you

xoxo

تاني تدوين بالعامية المصرية

إمبارح كنت مبسوت  مبسوط جدا عشان كل التصحيحات اللي فبلتها من الناس هنا في البرنامج
عشان كدا بداية من النهارة هاكتب تدوين كل يوم حتى إن  لو يكونه مش طويل .

excellent Job Phil, i am just afraid i'mnot sure what you tried to mean by the words in blue 

also the word

جمعة مباركة

جمعة مباركة
Hayırlı cumalar
Schönen Freitag
and
Happy friday :)

Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Medical and healthcare improvement is one of the greatest improvements that have been taken place by the human beings at the present time.

There are, however, drawbacks in addition to the advantages that we can benefit from this improvement.

This essay will consider both sides and will draw some relevant examples.

In one hand, there is a massive number of advantages of this development. For instance, we have become able to detect many diseases of embryos before they  even being born are even born. It is by the virtue of technological improvement that we are able to investigate and diagnose diseases, syndromes, or deficiencies very effectively and quicker than ever before. Clearly, it is possible at the present time to live longer even in the case of moderate to severe diseases.

For instance, one with down syndrome can live up to the age of 50 years.

Thanks to this development, we are giving people with many kinds of diseases the chance to live longer. And they are able to enjoy their lives and enrol into different activities in the society.

On the other hand, this development has also its drawbacks. To illustrate this, we have to consider the problems related to ageing aging

There are many diseases that are closely related to ageing aging. For instance, one of the most common diseases and syndromes is dementia. Another relevant example is Parkinson disease, where old people have problems in their neural system and this can affect their movement and regular activities.

Personally, as a dentist, I know exactly what does it mean what it means to lose your last tooth and to have to put removable dentures. Nothing can replace a human organ or a living part of our bodies and be as much effective as it should be.

In conclusion, we would, definitely, be able to live longer nowadays but we have to adapt with inevitable consequences of ageing aging.

excellent job

Negation

أجلس أينما تجلس.. أفعل ما تفعل
.أقول ما تقول...أحب ما تحب ) this part could have a lot of meanings here depending on what you'd like to show but in general the verb say (يقول) after  ما becomes تقل , we tend to remove the vowel after  ما as part of grammer ( not sure if you've reached this stage but here it is anyway )

Excellent job though