长发与短发

我不喜欢尼基塔·米尔扎里的新发型。她那样的短发造型看起来很丑。当她留长发时，她是女神，是印度尼西亚最漂亮的女演员。


long hair vs short hair

I don't like Nikita Mirzani's new look. She looks awful sporting a short hair like that. When her hair was long she looked like a goddess, the prettiest actress in Indonesia.

注意一下中英文语序的不同，还有用词搭配，你会更棒！最后我在演员前面加“女”，是为了突出她在演员中的地位范畴，限于女演员，所以把男演员排除在外，虽然英文没有直说。