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Hi! I'm Walter from China. I'd like to find some guys who love to practice English together, no matter you're native speaker or english learner. Together, we are strong!
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    昨天我跟朋友一起去了人气汉堡店。 --> 昨天我跟朋友一起去了一家人气汉堡店。

    这家店在新天地,名字是”SHAKE SHACK”。

    我们到了晚上7点半 --> 我们到的时候是晚上7点半 or 我们到的时候已经晚上7点半了

    店里面很多人排队。

    我没有去过非常期待! --> 我没有去过,所以非常期待!

    为了吃SHAKESHACK昨天我只吃了一个香蕉🍌 --> 为了吃SHAKESHACK,昨天我只吃了一个香蕉。

    点单完了但是没有椅子等了15分钟好容易我们会坐了。 --> 点完单后没有座位,等了15分钟好不容易才坐下。

    味道是太好吃!😋我非常感动了。 --> 味道太好吃了!我非常感动。

    下次也我再带朋友去。 --> 下次我还带朋友去。
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    August 30, 2019
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    August 29, 2019
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    Everything seems to be fine, they're great. I tweaked them a little to make them sound more natural.
    I'm not a professional teacher, so I don't know too many grammer rules. But we usually say "就...了" in this case. It means something will be done, or we'll trigger a specific event at that moment.


    再过两分钟,我们就到了。你准备好了吗?
    We’ll arrive in two minutes. Do you have everything ready?

    再过一个星期,他就过生日了。你给他买礼物了吗?
    He’ll be celebrating his birthday in a week. Have you already bought him a gift?

    再过三天,我们就要考试了。很多生词我还没学过。
    We have a test in three days. There are still a lot of new words I’ve yet to study.

    再过一个月,我们就放暑假了。我还要找工作实习。
    In about a month, we’ll get off for summer break. I still need to find an internship.

    再过一天,我就毕业了。我没想到时间过得这么快。
    In one day, I’ll be graduating. I never thought time could move so fast.

    再过四天,夏天就到了,免不了会很热。
    In four days, summer will be here. It’ll be hot.
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    August 29, 2019
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    November 7, 2018
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    肉和鱼你喜欢哪个?

    我果然还是喜欢吃肉!
    我跟朋友常常去吃烤肉,吃很多的肉。
    在烤肉店(我吃不但肉→我不但吃肉),(而且→还)(吃汤→喝汤)和(吃)韩式拌饭。想早点吃烤肉。
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    April 6, 2018
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    1. They are almost the same in most cases! 如何才能追到你? <-- equals to --> 怎么才能追到你? 2. But they're not the same when they're used as independent sentences. 我们去看电影吧,如何? "如何" is equal to "怎么样" here. 怎么?你不高兴? "怎么" is short for "怎么了" here.
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    April 2, 2018
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    昨天你做什么?

    昨天跟往常一样我去(参加了)社团活动。(但是)社团活动之后我去买(送给)朋友的生日礼物。(挑选这件礼物花了很长时间 or 挑选一件礼物是很花时间的)。
    希望她喜欢我的礼物!
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    April 2, 2018
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    意大利玫瑰水

    味道很好闻, 适合所有皮肤类型,不会堵塞毛孔,不会留下粘腻的感觉。(使用)之后,皮肤柔嫩光滑。


    You write perfect Chinese, like a native!

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    March 28, 2018
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    March 27, 2018
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  • Answered
    我还有别的事要忙,回聊,再见。
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    March 27, 2018
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