1. He is even recorded in history as the king who most fast finalize the lesson needed to be king. - He is even recorded in history as the king who completed his lessons needed to be a king the fastest.

2. There are kings the assessments of whom are controversial. - There are kings whose assessments were controversial.

3.In his period, Choseon was in chaotic state. It is not that far from war’s ending, and Choseon had attacked by ‘Yujin’. - In his period, Choseon was in a chaotic state. Choseon was attacked by Yujin near the end of the war.

4. Although he was taken the crown, his diplomatic policy is revaluated as practical in now days and he is regarded as unfortunated king. - Although his crown was taken, his diplomatic policy is considered practical in the modern day. He is also regarded as the unfortunate king.

5.The people got angry about the fact the king abandoned them, - People were angry because of the fact that the king abandoned them.

6.We can also think in other side about the blames on him. - (i'm not sure about this sentence, sorry!)

I eat banana for breakfast every morning. It's out of stock this morning so I had no choice but to eat an apple. I washed it with water <strike>it</strike> and I ate <strike>skin and all </strike>it all with its skin.

you probably have to provide a context first.

both are correct and natural to use. i personally prefer the 1st one.

1. how fast did you go under the speed camera? 2. are you in a business or a leisure trip?

신 was attached to 가지 to make it honorific.

verb 가지(다) honorific suffix 시 noun modifier ㄴ = 가지신

분 is the honorific version of 사람 (a person)

in summary 가지신 분 means a person wearing something

(Will not include corrections for obvious autocorrect spelling errors)

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Mabuhay!
Eric ang pangalan ko. Taga United States ako. Taga Michigan ako. Nag-aral Akt sa Lake Superior State University. Sports Management and major ko. Naglaro Jako ng professional basketball ng dalawampung taon.May podcast aso. Staying MAJOR and podcast ko. Gusto ko and YouTube videos. May YouTube channel aka. Gusto ko and Tagalog dahil nasa Pilipinas aka ngyon.

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It's grammatically okay ^^

Hello.

It's January 5th.
I didn't write in this diary for a long time.
I'm really sorry.
I had given up to study English.
I couldn't <strike>belive</strike> believe myself.
I thought that my English don't <strike>inprove</strike> improve.
I live in Japan.
<strike>Uesally</strike> Usually we speak Japanese.
We don't use English.
I failed.

Earlier this year,
I <strike>throght</strike> thought I want to change myself.
I'm going to try to write in English everyday.

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You're doing great! I think your level is already quite advanced because you are using complicated tenses already. Keep up the good work ^_^