Natural fur

Today I have noticed a lot of woman in natural mink fur coats and I experienced an anxious feelings. How many little poor animals were murdered for one coat? Why are they dying for somebody’s beauty and warm? This woman don’t think haw their wear was made! Why they don’t use other clothes? Today a lot of fashion brands made warm and beautiful wear of artificial materials. People are very powerful and they don’t need to murder animals, they need to protect them. We don’t live in age when to killing someone is continuing our life. I think that if they murder that animals themselves, they never buy and never wear such clothes. I think our government must to pay special attention to this problem. They must to make law about following: if the buyer wants to buy fur wear, he must to be involved in all stages, including killing an animal himself. And when the buyer wears this coat, society will know that he is a murder.

Today, I have been noticing a lot of woman in mink fur coats, and I have been feeling distressed. How many poor, little animals were murdered for one coat? Why are they having to die for someone else's warmth and vanity? These women do not stop to think (consider) how their fur coats were made! Why can't (don't) they wear other clothes instead? There are a lot of fashion brands that make warm and beautiful coats from artificial materials. People have a lot of power (over animals and the earth,) and they should not use it to murder innocent animals; They should (need to) protect them instead. In this day and age, we should be aware that everything is connected, that if we harm animals, it will affect (harm) us, too. I believe that if animals need to be murdered for clothes to be made, then we should never buy or wear those (such) clothes. I think our government must (needs to) pay special attention to this problem. They should make a law that states that if anyone wants to wear fur, that person must be required to make the coat him or herself, including killing the animal, so that when people in society see anyone wearing a fur coat, they will know that that person is a murderer. 

(Another way you can say the last sentence is "... including killing the animal. That way, when people in society see anyone wearing a fur coat, they will know that that person is a murderer.")

Hi! I hope that helped! I used (parenthesis) to write another way you could say the same sentence or phrase (group of words.) I think I understood what you meant, so I changed your words a little bit. For example, instead of beauty in the third sentence, I used vanity because I think it makes the meaning more clear, since the women are not really beautiful in the fur coats, but vain and superficial.) Also, in the fifth sentence, I think "can't" is better than "don't." The only sentence I did not understand was "We don’t live in age when to killing someone is continuing our life." I am not sure what you meant, so I wrote what I think you meant. Let me know if you have any questions. 

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