A new facility for our area

I'm practising my writing skills in English. Please feel free to correct any mistakes.

Write a report (200-220) based on the task below:
Your local council is planning to build either a library or a concert venue. Write a report, describing the benefits of each project and saying which one you would choose, and why.

Introduction:
The aim of this report is to describe the benefits of building a library or a concert venue in our area. Since the council is planning to build just one of them, we will analyse which facilities would be more beneficial for our area.
The library:
A library would allow people to borrow books at a low cost and it could also be used as a quiet place to study. Students would have a safe place where to study after school and it would let them do their homework without any distractions. Avid readers would be able to meet people with same interests and it would be a great opportunity to socialise with others.
The concert venue:
A concert venue would provide cultural entertainment to people who could enjoy shows and concerts. It would be a good way to escape from routine and it would benefit the area bringing some important artists to it. It would allow people to find out new genres of music and it would increase tourism, which would attract new businesses to the area, including restaurants and shops.
Recommendations
While the concert venue would attract some certain sections, a new library will appeal to the majority of the community. In my opinion, the council should build a new library because it would offer more benefits and it would be an improvement for the area.