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Hello, my name is Patrick and I currently live in Germany. I studied Japanese a bit while living in Okinawa and would like to brush up on my speaking skills and practice some grammar that I have probably forgotten in the past couple years :)
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Chihiro(ちひろ)
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Dec 3, 2021
はじめてのクラス、ありがとうございました! Talking to you, I felt you were talking very politely. In particular, I thought you used "助詞(じょし) e.g.て・に・を・は." well. Let's talk a lot in Japanese at italki and remember little by little! I support you.😄
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    January 9, 2018
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    Preparation for Goethe exam Seit eine Weile als Ich Deutsch gesprochen habe, aber Ich freue mich auf die Gelegenheit mehr zu lernen. Ich bin halb-Schweiz und hoffe dass in der Zukunft das Ich freißendes Deutsch mit meine Familie sprechen kann. Obwohl Schweizer-Deutsch ist ein bisschen anders als Hoch-Deutsch, alle Schweizer Bürger müssen beide verstehen. Daran kann Ich hoffentlich Hoch-Deutsch mit sie sprechen, und manchmal nur anhören wann sie Schweizer-Deutsch reden. (ich bin noch nicht sicher wann Mann, den Verb sprechen oder reden benutzt. Danke für Ihr Hilfe!)
    December 18, 2017
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    Nutrition and a healthy lifestyle 3

    But of course you can go too far when it comes to healthy diet. Are there any people among you who have ever counted calories for a longer period l(this sounds odd, sounds better to say "longer than X number of weeks/months" or "months/years?"? I mean meticulously (this beginning phrase 'I mean meticulously' is correct if spoken english, as during a speech, but written it is technically not grammatically correct), writing down all the calories of all that you ate throughout the day and then had a look at the end of the day, how much it was in total then totaling it all up at the end of the day? Maybe some of you did that; maybe you did it secretly for a while; maybe you were even quite open about it. (In english it is very common to list things out in lists of threes when trying to drive a point home. Typically when we do this we place slightly more emphasis on the last statement. Nothing grammatically wrong, just a tip on sounding natural). 
    That is what I did before the setback that I told you about, and what I would like to say to you now is: Do not be so hard on yourself. A healthy diet and a healthy lifestyle with exercise and sports, that does not have to be involve high mathematics, no constant calorie-counting calories and the feeling that it is does not working out the way you want it to be to, that you did notdon’t reach your daily goal. It doesn’t have to be involve a constant checking/looking at how many minutes you were able to lift weights or how many minutes you were able to spend on an exercise machine; no constant paying attention to fats, proteins and carbohydrates. (like I said before, if this is a speech it sounds great. However, if this is intended for a written audience, you should pay careful attention to these run-on sentences). Of course, it is important to pay attention to a healthy diet, but at some point, people face their limits. That should also be the key message of my short lecture: You cannot expect to always do everything perfectly. You must not constantly claim strive for perfectionism from yourself. And it's impossible to always pay close attention to everything, because that way, you only bring down yourself. That is by no means what we want to achieve. 
    (didn't have enough space to finish the rest) good luck with your speech! (Those should be 'these' in your last paragraph). Also sounds a little odd to be saying, I'm coming to a conclusion now). Overall, great job, I've looked over native speakers who would have struggled to write as well as you did. 
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    December 18, 2017
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    She said that she had seen an interesting advertisement in the newspaper.
    He said that they searched for a team member in a project team.
    A friend of mine told me that in this team it is important that you have a good attitude and that you are honest.
    She said that she had worked for a subsidiary in the US.
    Sarah said that she had a schedule on how to learn new vocabulary quickly. (I am guessing this is what you were trying to say)
    Sandra said that she was visiting a seminar in London.
    Daniel said that he had known the methodology to correctly build sentences. (Again taking my best guess at your intent.)
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    December 18, 2017
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