The U.K. is where I want to visit in the future.

I love the U.K. If anyone asked me the country I want to go, I would say “The U.K.” immediately. I have some reasons for that.

First, I love british music. Especially, rock ‘n’ roll music. This is the biggest reason. When I was 14, a song was played on the TV, and I was shocked. “Wow, it’s great! I’ve never listened to a song like this in my life!” The song was Wonderwall by Oasis. Since then, I have got into british music such as The Beatles, The Who, The Rolling Stones, The Smiths, Queen, David Bowie, Blur, Cream, and so on! Oasis is my most favourite band and I went to see Liam Gallagher (the frontman of the band) in Aichi last year. The gig was amazing and I was so impressed because he sang Wonderwall, which is the first Oasis song I’ve listened to and has many memories in that song for me. Therefore, I want to visit the U.K. and see where the song was produced and they lived.

Second, I love british accents. Since I started listening to british music, I watched many videos which the bands were interviewed and I realised how cool the British accent is! In Japan, most students study English with American accent, and I’m wondering why British accent isn’t used at schools in Japan...(of course, American accent is bloody amazing as well)! I have Youtube, so I can hear British accent wherever, whenever I want, but it would be great if I spend my time in the U.K. and hearing British English every day...is it a weird reason? XD

These are main two reasons why I would like to visit the U.K. Thank you for reading! If you have time, I would like you to correct my English :)

First of all, you wrote very interesting essay but let’s correct it a little bit. UK is the correct way of spelling. Do not write it U.K.

If somebody/someone asked me (not anyone). Use indefinite pronouns with any in negative sentences.

I love British music( possessive adjectives are written with capital letters if they refer to country or city or person).

This song brings back memories is much better to say :)

British accent (again capital letter)

Pay attention to difference between hear and listen (We use hear for sounds that come to our ears, without us necessarily trying to hear them! For example, 'They heard a strange noise in the middle of the night.' Listen is used to describe paying attention to sounds that are going on) So it is better to say listen English every day.

A holiday

A holiday is a nice opportunity for us to spend time together. We have been looking forward to the next holiday from the last one.

The sea is our popular holiday destination. Every year we spend our vacation next to the sea. The warm sea, sand, and hot sun are favorite stuff during a holiday. We like swimming and sunbathing instead of looking at sights or walking.

The reason for our trip is the sea's temperature. Our kids like the warm sea when its temperature can reach 28-29 degrees. It's beautiful to look at them while they are splashing each other in the sea.

We prefer to stay at a hotel rather than to rent apartments. A high rated hotel has everything needed for you. There're lots of prepared food, varied services, kid's animation and so forth. You don't need to think about your rest, because of everything around tunes on you. Rapturous yells of your kids will prove it.

We like when a hotel has a big green territory, and you can steadily enjoy it. The most vivid memories are when our children have been сaptured on photos with their positive emotions.

Every our holiday makes us closer to each other. For example, I never forgot the first holiday where we were resting with our little kid.

I was bearing my kid during the holiday, he was always with me. After the holiday, we have become really close to each other.

The essay is great. I made a few corrections.

After the word reason, use preposition for;

Rapturous yells of your kids-when you want to say that something ‘belongs’ to someone, you must use of. Check genitive case in English;

Do not use to in front of passive constructions in that context (have been captured).

Close to each other is a phrase (not each to other);

In the last sentence, I think Present Perfect is much better option because you are still close to each other :)

Hope this is helpful! Good luck :)

How to learn English

Today, I am learning English and I tried to search for 'How to learn English'.

Firstly, I started with the Unit 1 in ' English Grammar in Use’ written by Raymond Murphy and then I tried to do all exercises in the unit . After finishing the first lesson, I tried to read News in the Guardian that talk about ' Jeremy Hunt : What would Churchill say of Johnson hiding away?' aloud.

It's was very difficult for me to understand the whole text, but it's was really interesting.

I decided to learn English every day because my English is so bad and I want to improve it.

I corrected your spelling mistakes (there were a few of them like because, tried etc.) Please pay attention to the fact that you must change letter y into i, when a consonant is placed in front of it and you want to add the suffix -s/-es; For instance try-tries, but play-plays (a vowel is in front of y).

Use present continious when you speak about the actions happening at the moment of speaking (like today, I am learning English). You are learning it now, right?

You can start each paragraph with some linking word like firstly, secondly (make sure to check linking word list on the internet). They are very useful.

Hope my corrections are helpful. Good luck :)