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- 1(要使用这个词"期待、暑假") 我总是期待暑假。 2(要使用这个词"海滩") 给我最好的休息是海滩休息方式。 3(要使用这个词"晒") 我住在不够阳光的地方，所以我特别爱沙滩散步、洗海澡、晒太阳。 4(要使用这个词"舒适") 也重要在休息时有舒适条件。这样休息方式让我充满生命力和精力。
Hi, you have done a great job, there is only several little problems i found in your text.
1 : 我总是期待暑假。 is correct, or you can say: 我总是期待着暑假。they both make sense.
2. 海滩 is a location noun, but 休息方式 is more like a relax method, so proberly you can say: 海滩 对我来说 是最好的休息地点。
对我来说 means to me for me, this sentence means: Beach is the best relaxing place to me.
3. You can use 阴暗 instead 不够阳光 , 阴暗is a noun to discrub somewhere dark or gloomy. 在沙滩散步 you need a preposition before walking on the beach. 海水浴 or 洗海水浴 instant of 洗海澡。洗澡 is correct, but normally we donot use 澡when we discrub sea bath.
4. 舒适的休息 让 我 充满 活力和精力。your sentence can be simplify to this one. 舒适的休息 means comfortable rest or break, you can use adjective 舒适的 to define 休息. 活力 instead 生命力.
Hope this will help you, if you have any futher questions please no haztated to ask me!
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0 votedDecember 2, 20170 - Hi all I m looking for a group of people who are practicing english every! Hi, all, I am looking for someone or some group who could help me practice my english, so if you are a native speaker or you know someone who can help, please let me know! Or any group of english practicers. Really appreciated for any help!December 2, 201742
你好! Please, check and correct my sentences.
1. 学习外语对人有帮助。
2. 我妹妹都看了都书！
3. 我们的考试不是明天吗？1. I m not quite understand what U want to represent in this sentence, if you wanted to say learning foreigner language is useful to everyone, your sentence makes sense.
2. 我的妹妹都看书了！
3. 我们的考试不是在明天吗？
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