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    You can use "scrub your face". Especially if you use a cloth or something slightly more abrasive than just your hands. Some facial cleaning products are even called face scrub.
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    February 3, 2018
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    Struck is usually struck by something. It's to become aware of something in particular very suddenly. I was struck by her beauty. I was shocked and I was taken aback both work. You can add "very" or "completely" in front for emphasis in this situation.
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    January 4, 2018
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    Hakone Ekiden(Long Distance Relay Race)Capitals for title/event name

    Hakone Ekiden(Long Distance Relay Race)is held on the second and third day of each year in Japan. optional: (January 2nd and 3rd) instead)
    This historic competition was constituted in 1920.

    The running course is divided into 10 running sections from start to finish and the total distance amounts to over 100 miles.
    Runners from 20 colleges compete for first place and desperately try to pass their batons('tasuki') to reach the goal quickest.

    Since only ten runners are selected in each college, all runners belonging to the college teams have trained their entire college career's to participate in the race.

    The race is filled with many touching scenes from beginning to end.
    Sometimes, some competitors can't pass their batons to the next runner because of an unexpected injury or severe exhaustion.



    Mitchell: Cool, I'm surprised I didn't know about this event. The entry seems incomplete. Your concluding sentence is a little bit open ended. 

    Keep it up! 

    (thanks for the picture)

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    January 3, 2018
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  • Corrected

    I'm breathing you..

    A gentle breeze breaks down, my heart rate slows down, and I feel that you are thinking of me somewhere in this world. You only like me! But I'm breathing you and I'll die without you...


     Usually don't start a sentence with but (You only like me, but). It joins two sentences into one. 


    Mitchell: Creative! Keep it up!

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    January 3, 2018
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  • Corrected

    Mishima's interview 5

    Mishima: Ms. Fukuda, when young girls read my work, do you think they feel my work is indecent?

    Girl: No, I don't think so. However, from what I have read, it seemed to paint women as weak. When I talked to my friends about it , I said "Aren't we stronger than that?"

    Mishima: Well, I wrote a female main character who lives in Yoromeki as my ideal kind of woman, but some women got angry, saying "She is too weak!". Most women critics were saying things like this.

    Girl: Maybe they're being hypocritical.

    Boy: I wonder if women think at all?

    Mishima: Hahahaha, that's no good. Fufufufuf, I hope you don't really feel that way.

    Girl: Women think in their own way.

    Boy: I think there is an opinion out there that women who lack the ability of thinking independently are fine as they are.

    Mishima: You may not be wrong about that. However, I think there is a big difference between how men think and how women think. Women's thoughts are close to the earth and nature, while men's seem more separated from those two things. At first glance, men's thought are very clear, logic and organized, but those same thoughts are separated from the power of the earth and nature.



    I may have changed the meaning of some lines where they were unclear. Interesting writing! Keep it up!

    Mitchell

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    December 28, 2017
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