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    "Just what did he do that was so wrong?" is correct. Here, "that" is a relative pronoun (the antecedent is what he did) introducing a new clause where "wrong" functions as a predicate adjective for "that"/the antecedent. With similar meaning, one could also say "Just what did he do wrong?" Here, "wrong" is an adverb.
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    "Just what did he do that was so wrong?" is correct. Here, "that" is a relative pronoun (the antecedent is what he did) introducing a new clause where "wrong" functions as a predicate adjective for "that"/the antecedent. With similar meaning, one could also say "Just what did he do wrong?" Here, "wrong" is an adverb. I hope this is helpful. Let me know if I can answer any further questions.
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    Exhibition

    CT is well-known for having one of the most stunning amusement parks in the world. For those who are not familiar with theme parks, this review is about an exhibition in DisneyWorld. Last year <s>it was built a museum</s> a museum was built to showcase a variety of curiosities <s>of</s> from Disney movies <s>that were</s> never revealed before.

    The main purpose of this display is to explain in deep detail how movies were produced, how characters were originally devised, and so on. Excellent qualified curators will show you around the museum and <s>make you feel immersed</s> introduce you to Disney History. Furthermore, <s>there are activities in which you can participate, </s>you can participate in activities such as making a voiceover <s>in</s> over the dialogue of your favourite characters.

    One particular strength of the exhibition is that museum staff <s>is</s> are very thorough and most of them <s>partook</s> participated in the creation of Disney films. <s>hence they are an old hand in this matter</s> They are very able to answer any questions. By the end of your visit you are provided with leaflets and extra information. However, those who are eager to acquire more knowledge about Disney movies must pay an extra fee to continue their visit in the museum.

    I would highly recommend it to anyone who grew up watching Disney movies. It <s>is about </s> will be a trip down memory lane that will <s>make you remember moving</s> return you to past experiences <s>from the past</s>. Don’t be put off by the critics, <s>as they</s> the exhibition is improving <s>their work</s> every day. Without a shadow of <s>a</s> doubt, this is an exhibition not to be missed.

    <em>Hope this helps! Let me know if I can answer any other questions.</em>
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    I don't know why people are happy <s>aboot</s> about Ramadan!!!
    I should go to a <s>privacy</s> private alley <s>for</s> in order to smoke <s>smoking and</s> because I fear that <s>nobody</s> somebody will see me! Because I should respect <s>to</s> others. (A person respects other people and shows respect to others)
    And if an officer sees me , he will arrest<s>ed</s> me! It's <s>so bull sheet</s> bullshit. (one word)
    I hate Ramadan. I can't <s>drinking and eating and smoking</s> drink, eat, or smoke in the street!

    <em>Hope this helps! Let me know if you have any questions.</em>
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    Business sentences.

    John is going to go on a business trip next week. He told his secretary to book a flight for him. <s>His</s> He is flying to Paris. He wants to expand into new markets. He is looking for new investors now.
    He is going to change his job because he isn't satisfied with the working conditions and salary. He wants to <s>raise</s> build his qualifications and <s>develops</s> develop his skills.
    It's not easy to do business abroad because you have to know the regulations or hire people <s>to</s> who are familiar with them. Apart from that you have to have capital to rent or build an office, find proper workers and hire specialists (e.g. lawyers, translators).
    It's necessary to hire specialists if we want to increase sales. They will be responsible for cutting <s>cost</s> costs and <s>optimization of</s> optimizing production processes.
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    I have only heard of great uncle to refer to the uncle of my mom or dad
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    My three tools

    I have tree three tools to work for work: my notebook, my iPad, and my smartphone.
    I do the most activities in the notebook, because it is easy, quickly and comfortable because has a bigger screen. I use the iPad to make do simple things remotely, to have a little bit of portability. I like to use the iPad to do my personal things as write this written such as this essay. I use the my smartphone to take calls. I use it to do urgent things, when I'm outside and the activities can-t can't wait and I don't have my computer or mi my iPad in hand.

    I like the technology. EDIT: I enjoy using technology.
    Have a nice Thursday.

    Several issues with this sentence: I do the most activities in the notebook, because it is easy, quickly and comfortable because has a bigger screen.

    Revise to: I use my notebook most frequently, because it is easy to use with its big screen.

    Also, the word "tool" is typically not used to describe a notebook or piece of technology. Most commonly, tools are understood to be simple objects or instruments used when working with ones hands. Examples: hammer

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    December 14, 2017
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    Moscow on New Year's Eve

    Several years ago, Moscow was decorated very festively and beautifully. And the Most importantly, there are not just decorations, but lights and garlands everywhere. It looks very stylish. It seems to me like you get to a mystery fairy tale. Apart from Beside magical decorations, there is a roundabout merry-go-round with horses like those in childish children's cartoons. This is a lively cheerful fair where you can get buy some souvenirs, a Christmas tree and decorations for it, watch different performances, eat some delicious cakes and drink hot tea or maybe something hotter. Despite the fact that the weather might be cold, many people are looking forward to going to the city center to walk there.

    Tense is not the same throughout.

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    December 14, 2017
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