The place I go to often is the library next to my house. There are two main reasons to go there. First of all, it can inspire me a lot. When I’m discouraged, I often go there to read some stories about famous people. They always encourage me to overcome the difficulties in my life. Besides, it can broaden my horizons. Actually, I don’t even know there are hundreds of countries in the world before going to the library. So, I really enjoy going there.

Not quite sure what the sentence 'Actually, I don’t even know there are hundreds....' is there. But otherwise seems good, well done