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- This morning, I woke up with a sore throat. It was hard to eat breakfast because it hurt when I swallowed. At first, I thought it was just because of dry air, but then I noticed that many of my friends also had sore throats and raspy voices. Maybe a cold is going around. Today, I drank a lot of water and tried to rest as much as I could. I will go to bed early tonight to help my body recover. I really hope I feel better tomorrow. Being sick during summer break is the worst!0 votedJuly 25, 20250
- I began watching One Piece in my second year of high school. Today, I finally reached episode 1000. Even though there were times I felt bored and wanted to stop, I kept going. Now, I’m very close to the latest episode. I hope to watch all the newest episodes during summer break.0 votedJuly 25, 20251
- I'm trying to make every word on my flashcards in Mandarin. How do I say basic flashcard terms/phrases like: - Mnemonic - Mnemonic Starting Point (for mnemonics that are very long, it helps to drill just the first two parts) - For examples like - What does this image mean? - Term - Definition or Meaning - Stroke order - PronunciationJanuary 6, 202110
Today.
Today is one of my last days in Johannesburg. I'm eager to go back to my home country soon. I miss my country's food too much.
Earlier this morning, I called the person I would like to marry one day, and she told me that she was in a hurry to see me. She told me a short story about a man that she had met who was very determined to take her out on a date. We laughed about it and she told me that she loved me. That call made me feel a little bit more confident about her and about our future together.Here are explanations for the first few sentences.
- I replaced the "and" in sentence one with a period because the ideas of having a last day in Johannesburg is different from the idea that you're eager to be home.
- We use go back "to" a place.
- I added "home" in front of country to make it clearer what country you were talking about.
- "In a moment" is usually used for events that will happen within only a few minutes. Soon is better for events that will happen in a few days.
- I replaced "in the" with "this" because it just sounds better.
- "called" instead of "made a call" is enough
- I replaced "to talk with the person with who I would like to engage" with "the person I would like to marry one day" because we don't usually use "with whom" when writing something casual. "I would like to marry" is more active than "I would like to engage", and sounds more natural.
In general, great work, and I'm happy for you and your relationship!
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