The title is for a film which was produced in the 1990s. It talks about an American lady whose husband is an Iranian doctor who lives in America. They have got a four year old daughter whose name is Nickole.
The husband convinces his wife to visit his family in Iran for ten days during the Iraqi-Iranian war regardless of her objection. 
Then, he breaks his promise about return to America and forces her to live in Tahran. She tries several times to contact her mother or any foriegn empassy to be able of leaving Iran. However, she fails.
After many attempts, she get to find two people, a woman and her brother, who help her to leave. Her husband allows her travel to see her sick father but without her daughter. She brings her daughter and follows the escape plan across the Iranian-Turkish borders.
Finally, the brave woman and her daughter arrive at the American empassy.
This film is based on a true story and it contains many details but I just wrote the plot. It was very interesting and touching. I watched it with my mother who liked it so much.

Be careful with the so long sentences! 
To bring (There is a destination) To take, to carry (There is not it) 

Anyway, good job! 

Today(it is better to use nowadays), people are enjoying the convenience which is brought by modern technology. However, some people think that our life could be improved if low-level technology were applied. In my opinion, the advantages of using high-level technology properly outweigh the disadvantages.

In my opinion/From, under my point of view

Very good job! 

Hay que saber que hay personas que te ofrecen las estrellas y otras que te llevan a ellas. Esa es la diferencia entre quién te quiere y quién te ama.

Very good job! 

I have good memories about my childhood. I used to work hard at high school. For that reason/In that way/Therefore I always used to get good marks(british)/ grades(american), mainly in Maths(british)/Math(american). I used to like Maths class. Sometimes, I used to pretend I was sick, so I could stay at home. Once time I won a prize for being the best student. My parents was proud of me and very happy. I didn´t use to find it difficult to make friends. I was sociable and talkative. In fact, I´m still like this. I used to play computer games when I was child. My favorite game was Super Mario World. I used to go play volleyball near my home with my friends. I loved it, but it was difficult for me because I´m short. My friends were taller than me. In relation/ As regards the food, I didn´t use to like pasta. But now I love pasta! I used to believe that a woman in white in my city used to chase us (me and my friends). I used to have a lot of picnics with my friends and my mother. It was funny! We took food like popcorn, orange juice, chocolates, water. I still love this specific ¿program?. The funniest that I remember: I used to believe I could fly, like Superman.

Very good job!

I am still like this. Like this= así, de esta forma

Me encanta el horario de verano porque no tengo que ir a la escuela. En el verano, gano mucho dinero en mi trabajo porque trabajo a tiempo completo. Siempre salgo voy con amigos a la playa. Puedo quedarme despierto tan tarde como quiera. El verano son los mejores meses de mi vida durante el año. Me siento tan aliviada de no tener que preocuparme por ninguna prueba o proyecto, que realmente puedo dormir bien por una vez. Soy una persona que necesita formar parte de las actividades con mi familia y el verano me lo permite. En el verano puedo ser libre y hacer mis cosas, no tener momentos en los que tenga que estar en algún lugar. El horario de verano es para los niños en los que creo.¿? Es hora de que nuestras quemaduras de sol!¿?

Second option because it is an indirect question. For example: I want to know what she writes. Direct queston: what does she write?