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    The winter here is very long in BEIJING where I‘m living ,even can last for 4 months with low temperature and strong blowing wind although。When I entered my car this morning ,I noticed that there were a lot of leves on my car ’s hood。Obviously,the leaves fell badly during yesterday night due to a drop in temperature。The winter is coming for sure,and from today on,people will wear very thick and the first snowing is not too long away。

    Where I live in Beijing, the winter is very long. It can even last for four months with low temperatures and strong blowing winds. When I entered my car this morning I noticed that there were a lot of leaves on my car's hood. Obviously the leaves fell a lot last night due to a drop in temperature. Winter is coming for sure and from today onwards, people will wear very thick (and warm clothes). The first snow is not too far away.

    Very good!

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    November 15, 2017
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    Let me tell you about my friend’s story. 1)She is yoko who works in sports center as a trainer One day, two visitors have an argument in front of the aero bike. 2)After finished running an aero bike ,a middle aged woman didn't wipe the sweaty aero bike with a towel. 3) She usually does not follow the rule. 4)An elderly man knows her rude behavior and shouted her, “ 5)Why do you not wipe the wet aero bike? It is your sweat. you, son of a bitch! ". 6)He really mad at her. A large crowd of people gathered around him. 7)A staff said to him. “ Please don’t make a loud voice , It is obstruction of business.” 8)He said to a staff “ How dare you talk to me like that!. I am a guest , you are a staff.” They moved to a staff room. 9)An elderly man wanted a middle aged woman and staff to aplogize to him. Nobody tried to make peace with them. 10)A company didn’t support staff’s idea. 11)A company plan on letting a staff go. 12)This staff works about 7 years in the sports center. Her 5 collegues was rreally disappointed at the company’s idea and they are going to resign. Now, my friend is super busy. They are short of hands. It is a very complicated situation. 13)My husband wants to go to Germany and the Czech Republic to take pictures of steam locomotive. 14)I start to study German by myself. 15)It is very difficult for me to memorize a new vocabulary. 16)I hope my effort will help me to survive our trip someday. I bought a Halloween Jumbo lottery last month. I spent ten tickets 3000yen. The number 901 was lucky number. I won the Halloween prize of 10300yen. I was very happy and I saved it at the bank.

    1) Her name is Yoko (Yoko is capitalized becuase it's her name) and she (not who) works in a sports center as a trainer.

    2) After fininishing (use "ing" instead of "ed") running on an (use "an" instead of "a" becuae the word aero begins with the letter "a" which is a vowel) aero bike, the (not "a") middle-aged woman

    3) she usually does not follow this (not "the") rule

    4) An elderly man saw (not "knows.") and shouted at her

    5) why did (not "do" you need to use the past tense in this story) you not wipe the wer aero bike?

    6) he is really mad at her

    7) the staff said to him (the staff refers to multiple staff members) "please don't talk loudly (make a loud voice is incorrect)

    8) he said to the staff

    9) the elderly man wanted the middle-aged woman to apologize to him

    10) the company didn't support the staff's (possesive) idea

    11) the company plans on letting the staff go

    12) the staff worked about 7 years in the sports center

    13) steam locomotives (use plural tense, more than one steam locomotive. Also, steam locomotive is not generally used in English. Instead, we say steam train or just train)

    14) I have started to study German by myself

    15) It is very difficult for me to memorize new vocabulary (you don't need to use the word "a")

    16) I hope my efforts (in this sentance, efforts needs an "s" on the end, make plural) will help me to survive our trip someday.

    Very very good job!!!

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    November 15, 2017
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    Estudiante de enfermera Hola mi llamo es Caitlyn. Soy una estudiante de enfermera en estados unidos. Cuando me gradúe, quiero trabajar en una hospital que especialidad en la salud de las mujeres como un piso de madre/bebé o entrega. Quiero practicar español porque hay muchas personas que hablan español que viven en los estados. Ayudame a hablar español por favor!
    November 14, 2017
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    Question about a Spanish phrase Does anyone know the meaning of the Spanish phrase, "por luda"?
    November 14, 2017
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    A warm welcome will immediately be given from (after) your first step in the restaurant. You can expect a (dont need "a") great service from the professionally trained staff. On the menu, you will find (a variety of foods) varieties of food to choose from. All the Greyhound’s dishes are delicately prepared using innovative and creative techniques to provide a unique fusion of different cuisines. It is said that all the Greyhound’s dishes have stories behind them which adds to the cafe's attraction for diners. One of the recommended dishes is ‘Salmon Sashimi’ which is the combination of Japanese and Thai food. The dish consists of very fresh salmon sliced into thin pieces, served with Thai style dipping sauce. The fish is very fresh and (it) kind of melts in your mouth like butter. The spicy and sour sauce also marries well with the melting texture of raw fish. Another dish that you should try is ‘Tokyo Soba’. These delicious stir-fried noodles are made Japanese-style and flavored with soy sauce. The noodles go well with fresh vegetables and sliced chicken. When you start chewing it, you will smell the stir-fried noodle which is probably one of the best kitchen perfumes. It is a good idea to eat desserts after a meal and Greyhound offers varieties of them. One example is ‘Choc Shock’ or the delicious dark chocolate waffles. The waffles are crisp on the outside and tender yet toothsome on the inside. It goes well with chocolate ice-cream and whip cream. This will be one of the best waffles you have ever had.
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    November 14, 2017
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    I hate when my neighbor's dogs bark while im trying to sleep. Today I was at home all day: I vaccumed and washed the floor, arranged things, wrapped dusted... Suddenly I heard a beautiful melody and went to the backyard. It was my neighbor playing the piano. Unbelievable how the music affects people's inner feelings! Maybe i desire to see the beautiful world instead of sitting alone in the dim house. And then the dog began to whine. His voice was so tragic. What if the dog felt the same as i did?
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    November 14, 2017
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    Hello all ! I want to learn the Japanese language, Can someone help ? I can help you with English in return.
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    November 14, 2017
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