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Currently live in Taiwan,I'll go to Australia on Nov,first stop is Sydney.I know AU is so big and I'm desire to understand this country, please tell me more, like coffee culture,lifestyle or tennis...etc No matter you married or not, what ages you are,I submit on italki only for improving my English,as exchange I can help you practicing Mandarin or Chinese! Feel free for texting me ,we can arrange an appointment to chat on Skype!
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    我最坏的行为。

    我觉得最坏的事情是无所事事。在我看来,一个男人1必须(始终)在不同的领域进步。十年前我没有研究新的技能和知识,2因此现在我已经和我的同事比较的机会很大差距。我浪费我的工作时间在看电影和检查社交网络等无用的东西上。3今天我对失去的时间感到非常后悔。

    1.必須,始終 選擇一個就好,建議選擇'必須': 一個男人必須在不同的領域進步

    2.改成:因此現在我已經和我的同事有很大的差距。或:因此現在我得到的機會已經跟我同事有很大的差距。

    3.能夠了解你的意思,改成:我非常後悔過去所浪費的時間。會比較符合邏輯語意通順

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    August 16, 2018
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