This is a homework for my language school. Please, Could someone correct it?
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People have different opinions about where it is better to live. Some people think that a big city is a better place to live in, while other people think a village is a good place, too.

City life has various advantages in contrast to rural life. It offers numerous facilities and opportunities; for instance to get a job in a city, it is easier to get a company if you don't find a job or you will like to have your own company. Moreover, people who live in cities can find many entertainments like amusement parks, museums or cinemas so they have many opportunities for social life.

On the other hand, living in a big city can be very stressful as life is very busy. There are industries and pollution which is very harmful to people's health. Furthermore people who live in the country side have more life expectancy than those who live in an urban area.

However, living in the countryside is worse than living in a big city if you have a serious health problem because you would have to move to a big hospital to restore your health and the important hospitals are only in big cities.

In short, we can conclude that living in any part of the world has both advantages and disadvantages, itll depend on your lifestyle.