每个件事情都是一个机会。

当你学习外语时，每个件事情（对你来说）都是一个机会发展你的语言能力的机会。方法是，总是要努力用你学习的语言去思考。 当你用外语思考时，你所做的一切都是一个机会让你更了解那个语言的机会！捡收拾一个碗，做着饼干，收拾你的房子，吃晚饭，任何事情！
When you study a foreign language everything is an opportunity to develop your language skills. The trick is to always try to think in the language you are studying. When you think in a foreign language, everything you do is an opportunity to understand that language more. Picking up a plate, making cookies, tidying your house, eating dinner, anything!

我以前总是首先用英语思考，然后再翻译成汉语。但我发现了这并不是一个很好的方法。现在，当我写汉语的时候，我尝试首先用汉语思考，然后再翻译成英语。又也尝试在我的日常生活中多用汉语去思考。很难说话像一个以汉语为母语的人一样说话。
I used to always think in English first, then translate to Chinese. I've realized this is not a good way. Now I try to think in Chinese first, then translate into English. I also try to think in Chinese more often in my everyday life.

I have to say.Your Chinese is not bad.I know Chinese is not easy to learn.Especially its characters.It do not even have a rule to remember.And Chinese way to think is absolutely different to it in English.But belive me,you'll get over that.:)

What's more,pay attention to the attributive things.In Chinese,we always put the modifiy part between verb and object,no matter how long it is.

For example,you should say 一个发展你的语言能力的机会.

What's more,pay attention to this kind of words.一个，一条，一只，一件 etc.

After them are different objects.We can;t confuse them.

I hope what I said can help you.

And if you have more questions.I'll be glad to solve them.Ask me directly.:)