Help(please)
Hi, there
Could you help me?
1) Could you drop "that" in this sentence?
"The larger the business, the more titles THAT are present, such as CEO, COO and executive directors."
I prefer this version with a few changes. The "
are present": makes the sentence a bit awkward."The larger the business, the more titles
are present..".there are, including CEO, COO, and executive director
s (drop the "s")
2) Do you say "Both countries denied me citizenship, now I
can be
neither Lebanese nor Syrian. With the change I added, I like the first one better...but depending on the context, the second one can/could work. As in, " He rejected my request?? I'm shocked. Now I can't be Lebanese
OR Syrian!!! Now what do I do!?"
or "Now I can't be Lebanese or Syrian"?
Thank you!!