22/9/17

Today, I feel better, not lonely anymore. At my campus BBQ party, I met new friends and we talked together. It was a wonderful moment. After that, I walked for 1.5 kilometers to a bank to open a bank account, but I can’t open one today. I need to make an appointment and come back later. So, I had plenty of time to walk around city center and find some ingredients to cook Thai food. I went to many supermarkets but I couldn’t find what I wanted. However, I didn't give up. Then I went to Asia grocery and I found it at last. After I shopped, I went to my flat and cooked Thai food for the first time, by searching on the internet while I was cooking. As a result, it wasn’t too bad. I just need to practice more.

Mom (please correct this essay)

Mom
My dad died when I was in high school. Now I live with my mom and elder sister. My mom is in her 50s and she has retired now. She is very strict and reliable. I think she is the one who loves me the most in the world. In life, she is my role model, because she is very kind and always helps people without caring about her own grain (not sure what you're saying here, did you mean pain?) or loss. She is very hardworking, and studies almost everyday even now in her 50s. I love singing very much, but when I was a little girl, I couldn’t sing in public. I thought everyone would laugh at me because of my singing. Then on a beautiful sunny afternoon, I told my mom about this. She told me not to worry about other peoples opinions, and just be myself. After that, I began to enjoy singing, even if I don’t sing well. Through this, I’ve become more confident. My mom is really understanding and patient with me.

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Museum(travelling diary)

Could you please look over this for me?
Museums are my favorite places, among all kinds of tourist attractions. I think they are very interesting and useful and can broaden my horizons. I especially like the the museums that are in old buildings. Then I can have a fantastic view of their ancient buildings and learn a lot from their collections. I have been to the Tokyo National Museum before, when I was a junior at university. It is the largest art museum in Japan and one of the largest art museums in the world. Its buildings were established in 19th centuries and they are very dedicate and beautiful. They make the museum more attractive. It was a Saturday morning, I visited the museum with my best friend. By chance, the museum held a event that day. So we visited the museum for free. I saw a wide variety of collections in the museum. What impressed me most was the Egyptian mummy, which was in second floor. I have been really into Egyptian culture from a very young age. That was my first time seeing a mummy. I was very excited. I’m looking forward to visiting the Louvre in Paris. I have been fascinated by it since I read the Da Vinci code.

(very good! keep studying!)