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A day on the riverbank
I was fishing today and caught one Pike. Another one bit, but I didn't manage to hook it. As any other activity, fishing requires constant practice. Otherwise, your skills and instincts get rusty.
There are lovely days here now - very warm and sunny. The trees get green. and, because this area, where I'm, is rural - it's a one horse townThe area that I am in, which is rural, is a one horse town. Also, there are plenty of cherry and apple trees, which are blooming.
Nevertheless, it was a quite a windy day, especially on the riverbank. In the morning I felt cold, while later it became hot. It's the end of April, so the weather is a bit unstable.0 votedApril 29, 20191- Ayer fue una buena día! Ayer fue una buena día. Me encontré con dos de mis amigas. Fueron a el apartamento nuevo de mi amiga. Ella cocinó un cena maravilloso. Comimos carne estofada, papas, arroz blanco y ensalada con avocado y tomates. Después cena practicamos hablando Turco. Conocíamos a una clase de Turco año pasado. Nos hicimos amigas buenas. Ambos son casaban con hombres turcos. Es muy interesante escuchar sus historias. Yo disfruté el tiempo con ellas. Quiero verlos pronto.
April 29, 201980 - 二十一世紀美術館に金沢 昨日、二十一世紀美術館に見に行きました。金沢にあります。一番好きな分はコミュニティの画廊でした。芸術作品は小学生と中学生で(by)生み出した。若い芸術家の才能が凄く(かなり)感じ入りました。 *For reference* Yesterday I went to the 21st century art museum in Kanazawa. My favorite section was the community art gallery. These works were created by elementary and middle school students. I was quite impressed by the skill level of these young artists!January 12, 201812
Yesterday I have watched a biographical documentary
Yesterday I have watched a biographical documentary about the life of Whitney Houston. It was an interesting documentary and after seen this saw it, I was reflecting about how people who conquer fame have to deal with their personal problems. It must be very difficult to take action when a lot of people lays rely on you to earn money. I think fame and popularity has a price and sometimes it can take your freedom.Great job! Your thought were very interesting to read. I just made some minor adjustments to your sentences.
Corrections
1. The word "have" in this sentence isn't needed. Although "have watched" is used sometimes, its more common to say "watched" instead of "have watched".
2. The word "lays" would not be used in this instance. The word "rely" is a better word choice; you can also used the word "depend". Either rely or depend can be used; the have very similar meanings.
Rely: be dependent on. Example sentence: "The charity has to rely entirely on public donations."
Depend: rely on. Example sentence: "He is a person you could depend on."
I hope this helps! :)
0 votedSeptember 27, 20171SKILL EXCHANGE
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(*'▽'*)♪Send message to me and we can be wechat friendsGreat Job!! Overall your writings are good, I only made some small adjustments to make the sentences sound more natural. I hope this helps! :)
0 votedSeptember 27, 20171[ A Serbian friend of mine came to Kyoto76 ]
Would you mind correcting my essay? If you were me, how would
you go about writing it?
Which part should I describe with details? I hope my explanations are clear. I hope you can understand.
(Part-Two)
We decided on the meeting day. He came to Kyoto from Tokyo by a by/via Japanese burbullet-train. He has a JR free pass and could go almost everywhere using that pass.
He didn't have a Wi-Fi router during his stay in Japan. He worried about that the difficulties to contacting each other smoothly.
He told me that he didn't might not show up on the time, and to please wait for a while. So, I would have waited as much as I could.
Before we met at the in front of Kyoto Station, I took and sent their(?) photos for him. He showed up after ten minutes on that time. Then, we had a greeting and talked for a while.
After that, we went to Kiyomizu temple which is one of the world heritage. He told me that Japan was hot and humid.
We were pretty hungry. We stopped by a convenience store and had a light meal. some light meals. The store had a eat-in sit-down area space. I had a set of rice balls and he had a lunch box which looked like a fried chicken lunch box in the eat-in space.Feedback!
1. You can use either by or via in this sentence, but via is more specific than by. Example Sentence: "they came to Europe via Turkey" definition: traveling through (a place) en route to a destination.
2. I made small adjustments to make the sentence sound more natural.
3.Same as above
4. The phrase "on that time" should be omitted unless you are stating that your friend "arrived on time".
5.
A. Although "had some light meals" is correct, "had a light meal" sounds more natural because it implies that you and your friend ate together, even though you had two different meals. (Sometimes English doesn't make sense!) ヽ(´∀`)ノ
B. You would be understood if you say "eat-in space", but sit-down area is the most common way to describe this.
Overall, great job! Only minor adjustments are needed! I hope this helps!
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