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Hello, My name is Ciaran, I live in New Zealand. I'm looking for conversation partners in French Timezone is GMT+12 :(
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    Fourth Notebook - About tourism post-covid19

    Hi everybody,
    Today I want to talk about the world after COVID-19 crisis. Specifically<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">,</s> about the tourism in my country, Spain. Everyone knows that the South European countries, like Italy, Spain, or Portugal, need<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s the</s> tourism. It is an important percent of gross domestic product and after the global financial crisis of 2008 our economies are <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">harmed </s>recovering.
    What <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">mean is it</s> does this mean? <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">We must</s> Must we save a business model that we know is fragile, that <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">makes precarious employments</s> puts jobs at risk and only advantages <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a few </s> the rich? I do not think so. This <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">scene</s> is an opportunity to make some <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">different things</s> changes. Surely, we can do it differently/better.
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    May 20, 2020
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    Please, correct mistakes🙏

    If you were a student of Hogwarts, how would you get there?

    In my opinion, Mrs Rowling chose the <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">only</s> perfect way to get to Hogwarts.
    Steam trains look mysterious in our modern world. Technology can't exist <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">with</s> in a magic world properly. But when you take a trip on a steam train, you might feel <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">to get back to</s> like you're living in the past.
    <s>But </s>I don't like the way to get on <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">the</s> platform 9¾. Stations are very busy. It's difficult to disappear in crowd, someone <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">can</s> could see you. Especially when there <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">must</s> would be a lot of odd looking people with strange stuff<s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">s</s> on their trolleys. They're really attracting attention.
    <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">Which</s> What other ways could <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">be else</s> they enter platform 93/4?
    An Aeroplane is a technically complex thing.
    It is very far to <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">ride on</s> take a car and a taxi driver doesn't know where to go.
    A portal is good if it's in a secluded place but muggles may accidentally get through.
    Floo powder turned out not to be safe. Especially for young people, who <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">didn't see</s> haven't used it before. <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">And </s>Where <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">to</s> would you find such a big place with a fireplace for all of the students.
    Broomsticks are very expensive. Not everyone can fly on them and again, it's to far away.
    So, a steam train seems like the best way.
    But there <s style="color: rgb(0, 102, 204);">must</s> should be a spare way, just in case <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">particular case</s>.
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    April 1, 2020
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    Short Translation of a French Press Article #5

    On March 19th, the "collectif 19", which reunited more than six hundred doctors, have pressed charges <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">to</s> at the CJR (i.e. "Cour de Justice de la République, the french court that judges members of the current government) against Agnès Buzyn (the former Minister of Health) and Edouard Philippe (the actual Prime Minister). They accuse them of "guilty negligence" and "lie of State" in their management <s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);">over</s> of <s>the crisis of</s> the coronavirus outbreak. For the three founding doctors of this group, the government knew about the dangers linked to the disease but didn't act soon enough and <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">neither</s> didn't enact sufficient measurements. More precisely, they denounce the inadequate levels of masks in storage and the lack of systematical tests, as both would have <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">permit</s> helped to isolate "asymptomatic carriers" prone to <s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);">contaminate</s> contaminating several people. "Carers are in great danger and the french population as well, which could have been avoided if the right decisions had been taken in right time" summarizes the group's atto<s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">u</s>rney.
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    March 27, 2020
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    About me. Can you correct the following?

    Hello everybody!

    I am a proud student at a learning distance school <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">so</s>, I also work at a shoe shop and offer <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">some</s> German students private lessons. I graduated in 2017 where I received <s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);">something</s> a qualification equivalent to the American high-school diploma. At the moment, I'm aiming to get my A levels <s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);">at the moment</s> <s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);">in order</s> to study law at university.

    When I am not busy studying or working, <s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);">then </s>I enjoy reading books about self-improvement such as "You.Are.The.One" by Kute Blackson or "Think and Grow Rich" which is written by Napoleon Hill. I recommend both!

    Nothing is more relaxing than diving deep into the world of books on a rainy Sunday evening.

    Furthermore, I am a physically active person. That's why I do <s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);">some</s> pilates or yoga everyday. Additionally, I strengthen my muscles by working out a the gym (3-4 times a week). In my teenage years I took part in kickboxing, hip-hop and ballroom dancing where I earned some batches (badges??). <s style="color: rgb(0, 138, 0);">My goal is</s> I want to continue dancing one day because it is a great passion of mine. I am considering signing-up for some hip-hop or bachata classes. Bachata is a romantic dance <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">which</s> with its origins <s style="color: rgb(255, 153, 0);">lays</s> in the Dominican republic.
    In my opinion, it is necessary to keep your mind and body fit to enjoy life to the fullest.

    I am also interested in ayurveda and traditional Korean food!

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    March 27, 2020
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  • Answered
    It really depends on the context of the situation, could you give an example situation Sasha? For words specifically, a couple that spring to mind are "crisis", and "ordeal". A phrase could be "it's about as bad as it gets" for describing a situation or state of something. There is also "hitting rock bottom"/"hit rock bottom", but this is mostly to describe a stage in someones life where the person could get any worse, use this one carefully.
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    November 27, 2019
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    - Packing (verb: to pack), When you put things inside some sort of container. Examples: * "I'm packing my bag, we're leaving" * "Pack your bags" (before you travel) * "We need to pack the car" (put all the things we need in the car) * "I have a packed lunch today" (I prepared my lunch and put it in a container to bring today) * "This place is packed" (there is a lot of people here) - Package (noun), Normally something that is sent or received (maybe in the post). When I see this word I think of something that is wrapped in something else. A package could also mean a group of things or level of service. Like you might see "delux package" or "premium package" - Packaging The thing that wraps the package. Example: When you buy a new cellphone. It comes in a package (phone+charger+packaging). The packaging might be the box and the bag and the plastic on the phone. "This has really nice packaging" Unfortunately I think my answer might leave you more confused....
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    April 3, 2019
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