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This evening my friends and my brother's friends are going to go a concert .I think you should go because we are going to celebrate my birthday. Would you like to go to a concert with us? In addition If you go, you will meet my friends. My friends are the most affectionate and charming people that I know.

The concert will take place in the Vicente Calderon. Because this musical group never comes to Spain, it most likely will be the only time we can see them perform. I had to buy the tickets five months ago. Vicente Calderon is in Madrid and it is the home stadium of Athletico de Madrid.

This concert is very special for me, because it is my favorite musical group, Guns N´ Roses. The majority of their music is rock, but their songs are more famous than many other bands. I would go if I were you because last summer we were singing many songs this group performs.

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Practice writing

Please correct my English sentences.

I had a meeting at my place of work last night. This was the second time of I had attended this meeting.

The meeting started late at 6:30 pm, so the company provided some food. The food was pizza and fruit this time. The home made pizza was very delicious.

We have this meeting every month. To me, leaving home late at night is not ideal, but I should make an effort to be a good employee for them.


Thank you for reading.

Rude colleague

I truly believed that I could get along with anyone, but after I met one guy I decided to change my conviction. 
I have been going to language school for two years, and in this year I changed my class to a higher level. In the beginning everything was perfect, and I immediately took to my new teacher. She was better then my last one. I have had difficulties with making friends with my colleagues, probably because most of them knew each other from school.  Anyway, I was satisfied until I met Maćiek. He was younger then me (one year I guess), but much much better in English. Actually, he was the best student in our class of thirteen students, and I was wondering what he was doing in a B1 language course.

Everything would have been OK if he hadn't been so arrogant and narcissistic. Perhaps sometimes I looked at him with envy, because he had a beautiful British accent and wide vocabulary, but that did not excuse his behavior. One time he literally had a quarrel with the teacher in English about his behavior in the class. He was loud, and cursed in English, and the teacher asked him to calm down and not be that disrespectful. He said that it wasn't her problem and proceeded to carry on.

Sometimes he made rude comments when someone read with a strong Polish accent or didn't know what a particular word meant. When he was finally quiet, I thanked heaven for that! However, I started to feel uncomfortable in the class when he was present. Most of my colleagues ignored him, and I tried to ignore him as well, but it was difficult for me. Maybe it was because I didn't know hardly anyone, and he knew everyone from school.

When the school year ended, I wished I'd said something to him like how much I didn't care for his stupid comments.
However, I can't change the past. This year, he and I will be in different classes so the problem will be over.

Confrontation

1-Some people are here just to downvote another even when you will praise them. I am thinking of posting a thread under the title of " please downvote " to see what they are going to do. They are sick, and they need an urgent help.

2-That is correct. Highly educated people, especially in sophisticated jobs, have the feature desire to feel confident in their companies,  and they are in a position to compromise negotiate, because they know that they can be hired somewhere else.

People who don't respect cleaning workers and the other similar jobs don't deserve to live on our planet.

Some Writing Exercises

Typically, I write articles or stories. The stories tell about the real lives of people. I never wrote fiction, but I would like to do it. I always write in Portuguese, but from now on I am going to write at least one paragraph in English every day.
I begin to write defining what I would like to say. After, I next change many several times the order of issues. When I am satisfied, I try to solve all errors the in my grammar problems. So, I type the text and modify it many several times again. Finally, once the text is ready, Now, it is time to wait the judgment of readers. Despite all of this, I love to write.
I am Brazilian, and English is my second language. I need to improve my English grammar and all about the my structure of the English language. In addition, I want to be a better essay writer and, a more creative writer, and a good business writer.