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Look Looking back after job change
I want to look back at the past few months.
I changed my job a few months ago. This was the first experience in my career and a big challenge for me.
When I tried to change my job, someone said I was stupid, someone criticized me as self-serving, and of course, I realized my decision would disappoint many people.
However, nobody knows whether a challenging success challenge will succeed or not. I wouldn't like to regret that I didn't do accept the challenge. Finally, I decided to believe my heart.
At the first time At first after the change, I had a difficulty to adapt adapting myself to a new workplace since the original work style and the former work style were different and focused on adapting myself to the new place. After these months, I believe I got over the first step. At the same time, I understand my strength and weakness strengths and weaknesses. I keep improving my performance with self-development as a the next stage. Also, I recognize the diversity of my company and society. What feels comfortable I to me may make others uncomfortable. I would like to respect everyone’s style."original work style and the former work style" = original and former both seem to refer to your old job. Maybe you could write, "the previous/former work style and the current one ..."
You have excellent English skills! It was very interesting to read this narrative of your experience. Thanks for sharing.
0 votedJuly 29, 20180check this plz
Hello my name is Hiroto Tanigwa. And today I would like to talk about Torricelli and his work finding the atmospheric pressure.
It was known that well which depth is over 10 meters can not be pumped water directly. but people do not know why occur this phenomenon. Because there was not the concept of atmospheric pressure. In 1643, Torricelli experimented and proved the existence of atmospheric pressure.
research question
does atmospheric pressure exist ?check this plz
Hello my name is Hiroto Tanigwa. And today I would like to talk about Torricelli and his work finding the atmospheric pressure.
It was known that well which depth is over 10 meters can not be pumped water directly. but people do not know why occur this phenomenon. Because there was not the concept of atmospheric pressure. In 1643, Torricelli experimented and proved the existence of atmospheric pressure.
research question
does atmospheric pressure exist ?Hi, your writing is very good! There are just a couple mistakes, mainly with sentence structure:
well which depth is over 10 meters can not be pumped water directly (the structure is a little confusing - maybe you want to write: It was known that water cannot be pumped directly from a well which has a depth of over 10 meters.
, but people did not know why this phenomenon occurred because there was not the concept of atmospheric pressure.
Best wishes!
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